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[Report This] Published: January 01 1970 Updated: January 01 1970
Reviewer: LJin Signed
Date: February 22 2012 Title: None

I'm really liking how the story is developing so far! Very very sexy. :) 

And I like these stories about crimes that one didn't committed.  Can't wait for the next chapters.

Summary:

Will Hansen meets an unusual young girl, and stumbles into a strange new world when he offers to house-sit for a friend.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Body Exploration, Butt, Feet, Footwear, Mouth Play, Nose, Unaware, Gentle
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 54483 Read Count: 552871
[Report This] Published: April 06 2012 Updated: August 07 2017
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Date: May 06 2012 Title: A Girl Named Annie

I'm definitely enjoying this story, even more because of the slow development.

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Date: December 11 2012 Title: A Girl Named Annie

Poor Will. :(

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Date: July 13 2012 Title: A Girl Named Annie

Now I'm very curious about Liz!

Pariah by little mikey Rated: R starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 103]
Summary:

Nick Avery -- tall, handsome, and well-liked-- is paired with a short, unpopular know-it-all named Michelle for a chemistry project.  The experiment goes awry; Nick begins to shrink as Michelle grows taller and more beautiful.  But he soon learns that Michelle had actually planned this all along, and he now must come to terms with his new position at the bottom rung of the social ladder.  Only Michelle can help him now, but she is determined to make the most of her newfound power over her once-mighty lab partner.


Categories: Growing Woman, Humiliation, Slave, Slow Size Change, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 206702 Read Count: 408594
[Report This] Published: May 14 2012 Updated: October 15 2013
Reviewer: LJin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 01 2012 Title: Pariah

I am still wondering why Michelle is doing all this with Nick. I can't help but to think that maybe is because she has a crush on him-- wants to 'train' him and change him so she could own him and control him in every way possible. I find the way she tease and torture him somewhat different from the way others girls could do to someone she didn't liked. Maybe is just my imagination.

 

Or maybe she is simply using him in her experiment to see how much she can change his social status while improving herself, not caring at all about him. Just because she can.

 

I find fun to ponder about these things on characters. Heh

 

I really love this story, slow growth/shrinking is my fave. Great work!



Author's Response:

That's awesome, man :).  Glad you enjoy thinking about these things.  Because the next several chapters pretty much focus on this -- taking Nick on an emotional roller coaster ride as he tries to discern Michelle's true intentions.  That's what has been making the next chapters so hard to write, and why I'm constantly going back and changing things -- it's a tough balancing act, deciding what sentiments Michelle should reveal to Nick, and how soon.  But I think this will make for a much more interesting story than it would be otherwise.  And hopefully once you read it you'll agree!

Reviewer: LJin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 09 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Vulnerability

Nick is so gullible. Hah :P



Author's Response:

;)

Reviewer: LJin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 03 2013 Title: Chapter 18: After Dinner

I understand why people are feeling sorry for him, I would be more surprised if most wouldn't. Well, I also felt sorry for him sometimes. Also feel the overwhelming feeling of power, confidence and excitement Michelle feels each time she grows or realizes how much more of her fills his mind and body.

And this is exactly why immersion is such a wonderful thing. To almost feel what he feels, all the humiliation and such. I believe Michelle have a massive crush on Nicky. A very very unhealthy one. I believe she truly wants to own him. What most people forget is that 'love' isn't always demonstrated in caring gestures and acts. Nicky had his chance to have a gentle Michelle in the past, but he was a dick. He humiliated her, he hurt her both physically and mentally in a cruel way. But she is very very clever and intelligent, I think she realized this type of approach wasn't the right one to have him. To truly have Nick Avery for herself.

Now Nicky have to pay for his mistakes, and endure this new Michelle. The towering goddess who found the perfect way to break him and have the man she wished. I would be more sad if she turned to be all gentle with him right now, I would feel inclined to stop reading. Don't get me wrong, I love gentle stories. But I it would be so weird, for me, not making any sense if Michelle suddenly changed her approach to the old one. Nick over and over showed how much he 'tries' in vain to take advantage of her fake gentle side. She knows this. He just want her to be his trophy, he don't want to belong to her. I don't know how much of what I said is true, it is what I believe.

This is why, even though it's not my fave genre, I'm loving this story. Because its make sense to me, its exciting and well written. This is what separates a good story from a bad one for me. And this is a wonderful one.

 

Just my thoughts. Heh n.n Don't mind what I say, I just like, and feel the need, to speak/write what is in my mind sometimes.



Author's Response:

Well, I recall you like gentler stories, so I'm glad (and a bit surprised) you're still enjoying this one.  I get what you're saying and it's a really interesting way to look at it actually.  I can neither confirm nor deny what you said at this point :P.  But what you said might come into play in an interesting way (I hope it's interesting, anyway...)

Summary:

A young man inexplicably wakes up one day to an alternate world ruled by massive, powerful women. Everyday life becomes a struggle as he learns to cope with his lowly position in this new matriarchal society. Eventually, he develops a romantic relationship with his gorgeous high school teacher.

 


Categories: Insertion, Giantess, Mature (40-49), Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Maternal, New World Order
Characters: None
Growth: Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 40354 Read Count: 597739
[Report This] Published: June 01 2012 Updated: March 05 2015
Reviewer: LJin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 15 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Thank you for writing this story littlemac! :) I'm really enjoying!



Author's Response:

Great! :) Thank you for reviewing!

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Date: July 12 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Now I'm really really looking forward to the next chapter! I like Ms. Bianchi. :))

Retreat by Gheed Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 31]
Summary:

An aspiring salesman, eager to make a good impression at the company retreat, takes a wrong turn. 


Categories: Maternal, Giantess, Butt, Feet, Gentle
Characters: None
Growth: Mini GTS (16-30ft)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 8681 Read Count: 43668
[Report This] Published: June 23 2012 Updated: November 19 2012
Reviewer: LJin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 24 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Thank you for making another story! I really liked 'Close'. :)

This one had a very interesting start, I'm very curious to see what will happen to him.

Reviewer: LJin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 24 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

You are doing wonderful :)))

Adela by scrymgeour Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 50]
Summary:

At the beginning of the school year, a student named Martin finds himself shrunk and in the clutches of his old English teacher, Ms. Holly. He soon learns that she and her daughter, Adela, may have bigger plans in store for him--and the world.


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Butt, Adult 30-39, Crush, Feet, Growing Woman, Humiliation, Insertion, Mouth Play, New World Order, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.)
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Holly's Library
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 36380 Read Count: 297364
[Report This] Published: August 29 2012 Updated: December 02 2012
Reviewer: LJin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 15 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

I am trying to understand Holly and Adela, but with each new chapter these characters seem to grow more rich and complex. Its driving me crazy. Hah Especially Holly, I am still trying to figure what future she holds for Martin, from many things I can think of, some may seem kinda obvious others not so much... Maybe he is indeed the kind of good boy she seeks, like she said, the kind of slave (or pet) she desires to keep to help with certain tasks or feelings that only a very few people in ours lives can fill. Maybe. She seems like a very lonely woman after all. From the way she talked with her husband, and her feelings about him and their marriage with Martin, at the first chapter, seemed to be an event which marked her life and she can't forget. Enough to keep him with her during all this time and put these emotions into physical punishment against him. Just my thoughts.

 

I am loving your story and your writing style. Thank you for sharing with us. n.n



Author's Response:

I like your thoughts about Holly, in particular. I think that's hammer to nail analysis.

I'll post another chapter tonight, when I get time away from work.

--scrymgeour

Reviewer: LJin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 26 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17

I don't have much to say right now, only that I am very very anxious for the last chapters.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.

I have about three left (20 is a good, round number, and then there's an epilogue). Should have time to write them out in the next few days.

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Date: October 20 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

I don't know, there is something in Adela that makes me want to doubt her actions. Since she said that everything was just a game. It's easy for someone to sacrifice some pawns  (or realize some of Martin's requests and try to befriend him) in order to achieve something greater in future. Holly and Adela don't appear to be very close, she doesn't even call her 'mother', at leat not too much from what I noticed. Martin certainly has a very strong willed mind, maybe is something both Holly and Adela desires a lot at the moment. It's so easy for most men or women to fall in temptation, with Holly/Adele's power this temptation looks so absurdly greater that is enough to make them even desire to lose humanity and live only to these carnal feelings (I can think of many people from ours giantess community). Others that don't apply to these feelings, certainly would lose their mind to fear, chaos and despair. I can think that only a very few people that would try to adapt and live this new life as best, happy and healthy as they could. I can't help but to picture Martin being a very valuable piece in their game and both of them are somehow fighting for him.



Author's Response:

I like this. Don't want to give anything away, but Adela and Holly do not have a very close relationship, and there is some considerable, unspoken from Adela's side re. what Holly did to her husband (Adela's father).

Thanks for the review, LJin.

Misako's Sport by Makaze Rated: X starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 6]
Summary:

Misako, a goddess of competition and strength decides to visit a city and play a bit of a game with them, a short lived game. However she gets distracted by the less then competitive city's skyline and decides to play some games of her own.

Warning: This story does contain a Hermaphrodite Giantess, if you are...easily squicked by such things, please hit back.


Categories: Futanari, Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Crush, Feet, Insertion, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3172 Read Count: 22375
[Report This] Published: September 06 2012 Updated: September 06 2012
Reviewer: LJin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 07 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Futanari Gigantess stories are so rare. Especially good ones.

 

I really liked this story, thank you for sharing with us.

Summary:

Hospins is the last settlement of humans. Jared was a normal kid, until a farming accident forced him to flee, into a forest filled with danger of a giantess kind.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Couples , Gentle, Mouth Play, Maternal, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 7230 Read Count: 59874
[Report This] Published: September 16 2012 Updated: November 19 2012
Reviewer: LJin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 16 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Farming Accident

I really like this kind of fantasy scenario. You made it look even more interesting as I kept reading. I am really curious and anxious to discover how this giantess will be.

 

Like @Afroking just said, I think you should describe a bit more about Jared; like the color of his hair, or if he is very weak or strong, or how tall he is, just some examples. I couldn't help but to keep wondering throughout the entire chapter how old he is since the elder called him kid. Well, some old people like to say that even a young 26 years old man is still just a kid to them Hah

Sweat & Tears by kyary Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 56]
Summary:

Joe gets a new roommate, amazonesque basketball player Alex. But it's not all roses when the pheromones released in her sweat seem to have a strange effect on him. The sweet girl might not be so nice forever when her trauma and desires comingle with the state of her dwindling roommate.


Categories: Humiliation, Young Adult 20-29, Feet, Entrapment, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Muscle, Slow Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 14086 Read Count: 142064
[Report This] Published: September 18 2012 Updated: October 23 2012
Reviewer: LJin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 18 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Sounds promising!



Author's Response:

Thanks for seeing some potential in it. I wrote this kind of rushed in spurts. This is the first story I've ever actually sat down and wrote and a major reason for that is I really dislike planning and writing beginnings. So if it wasn't too excruciating so far that's all I can ask for.

Summary:

Matthew has the chance of a lifetime as a devil offers to give him everything he ever wanted. The consequences though may be more than he anticipated.


Categories: Slow Size Change, Giantess, Humiliation, Growing Woman, Maternal
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 23703 Read Count: 111529
[Report This] Published: October 20 2012 Updated: March 06 2016
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Date: October 20 2012 Title: Chapter 2: House Guest

I guess this one can't be replaced with the wealth. Heh

Summary:

Scott Stevens once again finds himself shrunken and in the hands of his sister Maggie, who brings her tiny sibling along for a week of soccer camp. When her teammates discover the miniature teen, he'll find himself in problems even deeper than giant shoes.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Mature (40-49), Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Maternal, Mouth Play, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Time-Out
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14746 Read Count: 126168
[Report This] Published: November 29 2012 Updated: December 09 2012
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Date: December 09 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Insanity Proposal

Scott can't deny that this is a very tempting offer, as I can see that he is clearly being greatly affected physically and psychologically by the harsh treatment of his mother and even his little sister.

Not to mention the exciting feeling of being together with a cute young girl like Janie slowing dominating him, he may seem to resist but after that kiss and other things that may happen I don't think his strength will last long. At leat she isn't domineering like his mother and little sister, maybe he can have a better life with her indeed. She may really like and love him. A different life, being a small human 'boyfriend' that belongs to a young girl, maybe she could start to see him differently after a while, as a little pet or something else, she will be his 'owner' after all. But love can also be a dangerous feeling.

On the other hand, despite his mother being extremely rough, all she wants is to raise him properly like she believes is right, as the previously chapters I could see she really loves him in her own way and wouldn't want to see him being harmed by others. If he plays by his mother rules and be a good boy, not calling bad names, pushing his little sister and other things she dissaproves (many rightly) he woulnd't be forced to be shrunken against his will. Seeing now, she was never 'unfair' with him, only punishing when she thought he really 'deserved' that to learn about his wrong doings. Even if in a very harsh way. Well, It's the law after all, she can! :P Heh

 



Author's Response:

i always appreciate your philosophical breakdown reviews of my stories, you consistently get almost exactly the vibe i was going for. thanks for reading/reviewing!

For Her by kyary Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 17]
Summary:

A brother keeps his little sister alive by allowing her to siphon off part of his immune system every day. But when she begins to realize she can take other things from her brother as well, the petite girl uses it to grow at his expense.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Feet, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Growing Woman, Humiliation, Incest
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5617 Read Count: 39726
[Report This] Published: December 06 2012 Updated: December 09 2012
Reviewer: LJin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 09 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

An overly pampered young girl with this kind of power is something to be afraid of.

She probably only cares about her big brother that she loves very very much, which is something cute, I can feel that she would never harm or abuse him but she have no gentle feelings towards those who stand in her way or defy her. Just my opinion.

Big bro will have quite a difficult time raising his not so little and weak sister properly now that she discovered this immense power. And since everything that matters to him is her happiness, as he clearly sacrificed himself for her health, I wonder if he will really try to control her now only to be confronted by his worst enemy, the sad face of his little sister. I can't think that he can win against this one.



Author's Response:

"An overly pampered young girl with this kind of power is something to be afraid of."

Exactly! That's one of the biggest appeals for me in this fetish, not just a woman being large and powerful, but also that she's flawed or immature. Girls, especially younger ones, can be very cruel, but in real life they rarely have the ability (physically at least) to do anything too bad. It's scary and, of course, exciting.

She does love and care about her brother greatly, but she doesn't really know or understand how this all could make him feel. Heh, well, you'll see.