Penname: licktoy [Contact] Real name:
Member Since: August 05 2006
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I love giantess stories about normal-sized dominant women and shrunk male. I like if the scene is "realistic" and the plot graduates as women slowly awake their dominant site. 

I like if a D/s relationship develops between woman and her shrunk male. If the woman uses her female-power to play and manipulate her little man. Constantly pushing the limits and turning him into her obedient little slave.


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Summary:

Enlisting the aid of his sister, a teenaged highschooler who has been inadvertantly shrunk decides he wants to crash the birthday party of the girl he's been crushing on, but the party is girls only.

After the party, the story tracks the tribulations of the shrunken lad as he navigates his way through a sea of lovely ladies.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Body Exploration, Butt, Entrapment, Gentle, Incest, Insertion, Lesbians, Maternal, Mouth Play, Slave, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 180 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 207233 Read Count: 2409409
[Report This] Published: July 17 2015 Updated: September 06 2017
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Date: April 10 2016 Title: Chapter 81: Katie

This is sooo hot. Please provide the next chapter ASAP :-)

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Date: April 13 2016 Title: Chapter 82: Student/Teacher Conference

Amazing chapter!

Katie's attitude radiates kind of dominance (which I find very erotic). And although Tom is attracted to Katie he gets a little nervous when she expresses her power a bit - I like that moment very much!

So now she is going to use him as her sextoy. I hope she will have a lot of fun :-).And I am looking forward to every aspect of it. Growing erotic tension and then satisfying her sexual needs by dominating Tom and using him for her pleasure and amusement. And how Tom will be willing to serve her and at the same time he will be sometimes nervous. And how he will get sometimes a bit more as he would desire - but not too much - just to push his submissive buttons a bit further and extend his limits :-)

I think it would be appropriate if Tom is requested to stay respectful to his teacher and address her Miss Harwood instead of Katie ;) Even if she uses him as her ass-kandy; just his head exposed from her anus. (I just love that term you introduced in Michael story.)

I cannot wait how this continues. Thanks a lot!

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Date: April 15 2016 Title: Chapter 83: Teacher's Pet

I like the idea with the crop. As Katie used it to flip Tom and then later on tethering him to the crop and dragging him along her leg - really very erotic idea. (These creative ideas I love very much in your stories.) She demonstrated her power over him and he was completely helpless and could do nothing about that.

I am not sure how to address it but I missed certain spirit of Katie you created in the previous chapter. As if this chapter somehow discontinued from that. I am not sure why I have such feelings but something did not match (maybe she because she acts like a professional dominatrix? .. maybe her leather dress? ... I am really not sure why).
I have a feeling like Tom fall asleep (he was very tired anyway) and this chapter was just his dream. Now he will wake up (maybe still on the Cassidy table) and Katie will tease him about what she might do with him ... Then putting him into her purse she as leaves Cassidy to go home. And then at the home she would bind him to the riding crop (without leather dress), teasing him a bit and turning him into her little slave and pet for her pleasure and amusement.

I wish this chapter was just a dream or return back to that sensual domination you indicated in previous chapters :-). 

Please do not take my comments wrong.

I really like your stories and cannot wait for the next chapter.

 



Author's Response:

I appreciate your input. All I can say is wait for the next chapter to see where this goes :)

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Date: April 19 2016 Title: Chapter 84: Fit to be Tied

I am very glad Tom was just dreaming.

So Tom had a lucid dream. It means he was aware of dreaming and probably he also could control the dream into certain extent. It looks he enjoyed that dream - being tethered to the crop and face-down stroked against her ass (which is a beautiful scene).
It indicates he is submissive and he likes being dominated and used by giantess goddesses for their pleasure and amusement.

I like Katie is just warming herself up in this chapter ;-). Possibly she can smell his submissiveness which in return just boosts her dominant / sadistic needs.

E.g. it is obvious her dominance graduates as he submits to her:

It starts when she uses her stern voice asking him to address her properly Miss Harwood instead of Katie. He submits and corrects himself.

Then it continues when she brings her silicon friend and he looks up at her with sad eyes (this is absolutely great moment). Probably amused (and satisfied) with his reaction she responses with a smile and then pushes him even more into submission by saying she does not care and then bluntly and mercilessly informs him what is going to happen (which is another excellent moment in the story). He murmurs something weakly and submits again. I can just imagine the rush of power when Katie senses she has a natural submissive in front of her (in addition shrunk to few inches) - because if he is naturally submissive she can easily turn him into her obedient little servant or slave who will eagerly please her. And what more a dominant woman could wish for? ;-)

 

Licking her lower lip means the action starts :-). I absolutely love how she uses him to warm up. Silicon friend in vertical position means Tom is head down. I would just love to be on his place :-). I like very much the hovering and then the smothering scene - it is so erotic :-). She clearly enjoys his helplessness and her power over him.

Then there is one more interesting moment for me. It is when she brings him back to her face. You writes: "She smiled, before puckering and kissing his torso, tongue lapping at him and flicking his excitement." The moment of truth. He is excited and it must be a clear evidence for her Tom is a natural submissive and he likes the way she treats him. He likes to be dominated by her. And although he may be scary or afraid he is excited to be turned into her little sex-slave - only a true submissive can be turned on by this :-).

I hope Katie will realize that and she will use it to her advantage. As TomSpeedy has already pointed she could turn this little submissive into her servant. (If I remember correctly nobody used Tom as the servant yet.) Although he is very small she can still do various tasks for her. Sloppy job would be punished and good job would be rewarded. To increase his obedience and desire to please her she could think to deny his orgasms and forbid him to masturbate. She can tease him close to the climax and then let him beg for the permission to ejaculate - she can laugh at him and just say "No, you may not.". And if she allows him to climax it should be amusing for her.

Same as TomSpeedy I think Katie could talk more. Knowing little Tom is excited when dominated she could tease him by saying / indicating what she might do to him and how she is going to enjoy him. And when he pleases her she could tell him how good little slave / servant he is.

I also like TomSpeedy ideas of  sewing and gagging. And please do not forget the ass-candy - sticking just his head out.

She also could introduce some rituals to properly thanks her, greet her, kissing her, begging her, kneeling, ..., licking, ....

Later on it would be very interesting to see how Katie tells Cassidy that Tom actually likes to be dominated demonstrating his obedience and arousal in front of her. Then they could dominate him together.

... there are so many possibilities now :-).

But most importantly. I would really really love if Katie is not like Janine. If she preserves her special spirit and if she stays sensual, sophisticated and creative while enjoying Tom.

And please do not

Ok, this was a very long comment but I liked the story very much and had to express myself.

I really cannot wait for the next chapter.

 

Reviewer: licktoy Signed
Date: April 20 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Tom's Story

@TomSpeedy: I understand you do not want to advertise other stories here. But if you experienced such heart beating I would really like to read it :-) Would it be possible you provide the name or link to that story please? I think Tom's story will not be harmed if you do so.

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Date: April 21 2016 Title: Chapter 85: Extra Credit

Another extraordinary chapter!

I like Katie's did not start to feel sorry for Tom after pulling him out. She tried to awake him just because she wanted to continue in her pleasuring - which indicates how deliciously cruel she can be. I would almost say she pursed her lips not because of Tom condition but because she got a bit frustrated she had to interrupt her enjoyment. (I am sure she will tie him on securely next time ;-))

Katie wanted to have him awake and conscious because her dominant lust enjoys when her "victim" suffers for her pleasure. Therefore to intensify the experience she needs to see emotional effects of her domination. She gets pleasure from seeing a despair in his eyes and from seeing he is actually turned on when she treats this little submissive like this. And she would miss all these things if he is unconscious :-).
She realized it when she wanted to feel him inside her ass and better decided to share this experience with him once he is awake - Tom should be really really thankful she was so kind to him ;-).


Will she make Tom sorry he spoiled her pleasure by loosing consciousness? ;)

I am curious how she continues to enslave him. I would like to see he makes him her servant too. He could e.g. clean her table, interesting would be if she let him clean the hairbrush from her hairs ;). ...

When Tom is sewed in her underpants, it can be interesting when she goes to pee on a toilet - pulling panties down and looking at Tom from above the porcelain toilet. Maybe she does not have to use the toilet paper before pulling up ;-).

I hope Katie's dominance will grow but she stays sensual and sophisticated.

I cannot wait how this continue.

 

Summary:

Teenager Michael Hearst born with a silver spoon in his mouth and a sense of entitlement given his family name, offends the wrong person. Shortly after, he begins to feel ill, returning home to a house where his younger sister is coincidentally having an unsupervised sleepover with a handful of her girlfriends.

 


Categories: Body Exploration, Butt, Entrapment, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Mouth Play, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 59771 Read Count: 622581
[Report This] Published: November 04 2015 Updated: June 09 2016
Reviewer: licktoy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 12 2016 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

I have just read the whole story and same as Tom's Story this one is also excelent.

This chapter I liked the most.

In summary:
Her psychological ramifications of her complete and utter domination sent over the edge me too :-)



Author's Response:

Agreed

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Date: March 29 2016 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

I like playful dominant attitude of Lucie. I am really curious how she and Mirielle are going to continue with Michale. It looks both girls are going to have a lot of fun teaching Michael how to respect women :-)

Can't wait for the next chapter.

 

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Date: March 27 2016 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

I am very curious how those 'unusual effects on others' mentioned by Lucie will work on Lucie itself ;-) Especially when gypsies are so temperament nation.

Cannot wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Indeed, the term 'Gypped' stems from the perception they are very adept at bartering and getting the upper hand in negotiations.

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Date: March 22 2016 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Mirielle is a very smart woman. She knows Michael is an arrogant boy. His ego is hurt. If he is restored to his normal size she would not be able to prevent him to revenge or cause serious problems. Therefore there is no point she is going to help him. I like how she manipulates him by giving him a hope in order to submit her will.

I am very curious how she will interact with Lucie. Maybe they could dominate Michael together to teach him to be more respectful. ;-) Except using him for sex they also could start to train him to obedient e.g. by giving him various ridiculous (humiliating) tasks for their amusement and punishing him if he hesitates to obey --- to break his big ego.

Also in some previous chapter Mirielle thought about having Michael's father in her ass so that his head would stick out. Maybe she could try it first with Michael. Having him there his head out. Completely ignoring his conditions - taking shower, going to pee etc.

I like the term 'ass candy'.

Reviewer: licktoy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 19 2016 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Very nice chapter. Looking forward how this will continue.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the input. I am torn as to how I want to proceed with this story. The next few chapters could be telling

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Date: March 16 2016 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

If I remember correctly Michael was looking forward to flirt with Mirielle in the first chapter. Be careful what you wish for :-).

I like Mirielle's dominant attitude when Michael is shyly asking about calling to Lucie and she answers she is going to pee and then uses him for her amusement. Only what matters are her whims.

I am very curious what happens when she pulled him out from her pussy. I guess the dental floss will be very slippery so it will be not easy to release him from the dildo ;-)
Maybe she will just not bother with him and after getting what she wanted she will just ignore him and place him together with the dildo back on the nightstand.

I cannot wait how this continues. Thanks for nice story :-)



Author's Response:

Yep Michael was very hot to trot for the objectified Mirielle thinking of things he would or could do to her. Well... he has now come to realize the difference between wanting and having. Thanks for the review. Stay tuned to the next chapter.

Summary:

A shrinking story told from the perspective of Billy Little. An odd character, that happens to stumble into something that will dramatically change his life forever. It's an extremely detailed depiction of his nightmarish episodes. This is just the beginnings of something so much bigger than Mr. Little. Because, before he realizes what's actually happening, the entire world has already changed into a completely different humanity.


Categories: Giantess, Butt, Entrapment, Fantasy, Feet, Humiliation, Legwear, Slave, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 63 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 154994 Read Count: 655169
[Report This] Published: September 25 2016 Updated: July 24 2017
Reviewer: licktoy Signed
Date: September 17 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

@midnight

I hope you are doing well. We really miss your story I hope you continue soon.

Reviewer: licktoy Signed
Date: July 27 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

@TomSpeedy:

The whole day in her panties - would that be really a punishment for you? ;-)

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Date: July 24 2017 Title: Chapter 63: Twinkies Palace of Pain ~ 2

I like you started to incorporate the aspect of fear. The last two chapters were perfect!

Jeff could try to pull her panties a bit aside and then crawl inside. If he is lucky he gets on her clit :-)

I am curious if Twila somehow feeds her pets or leave them hungry ;-) At least she could let them clean her fingers. Also I am looking forward what happens when Melanie comes to collect Jeff.



Author's Response:

I like how you think, LT!

Reviewer: licktoy Signed
Date: July 16 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

@midnight

I would not be afraid to spread this story among multiple characters. I think, having multiple characters gives you a flexibility to incorporate various ideas. Also characters can share their plot. E.g. Maxine and Amy can meet and have fun with Tom and Bill together. Or Angela can humiliate Dennis in front of Maxine ;-)

This is my favorite story and I think the best just starts. So I hope it will not end soon.



Author's Response:

Yes, I have to agree. The chapters aren't really so long, that anyone reading the completed story (all in one sitting) shouldn't find it too difficult to follow, I mean - there's only seven or eight female characters and just a handful of male ones, ...I think I'll just continue the same way, for now. 

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Date: January 22 2017 Title: Chapter 35: ~Punishment~

I think you are a very talented writer but somehow I have mixed feelings about this chapter. I miss certain spirit you built across previous chapters with Amy. I think you are moving too fast to TomSpeedy proposal. As if it is not your writing.

E.g. the way how Amy falls asleep does not sound authentic. Maybe she just pretends she sleeps but originally (from the chapter 'A New Attitude') Amy wanted her ass worshiped by a little man. I think the scene is a bit artificial just to move quickly to TomSpeedy proposal - that is just my impression.

In some previous comments you mentioned "A Night with Shannon". That story does not contain any "special" sexual activities but is still great - because there is a powerful spirit between lines. I would love to feel the spirit in your story again.

Please do not understand my feedback incorrectly. I do not mean it wrong. I really enjoy your style of writing and I like your stories very much. I have just confused feelings about this chapter.

I cannot wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Yeah, I have to agree.  I reread the chapter a few times and realized that it felt a bit rushed.  The build up wasn't there.  I've been slightly distracted (starting off this new year) and wasn't completely focused on what I was doing.  I may have to edit this chapter...

  Thank's for taking the time and giving the honest and informative review, ...without some feedback (real feedback) and some detailed input, how can a writer expect to improve?  Much appreciated.  

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Date: July 16 2017 Title: Chapter 61: Late Night Date ~ con't

Wow, I think this was one of the best chapters. That toilet scene was just perfect! I loved her sudden change from obsessive to stern look. And then his hanging was a beautiful helpless scene :-)

It looks Amy did not wipe herself before hanging little Tom - which was extra naughty from her :-)
How did she smell (and taste) for Tom?  ;-)

I loved that uncertainty whether he falls down or not.

Hm, but the toilet is not flushed yet, so maybe his disrespect will have some consequences ;-)

I am really looking forward how this continue.

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Date: July 10 2017 Title: Chapter 60: 'Squashed'

These last two chapters were very delicious.

I loved when Maxine said Tom is ok and encouraged Amy to sit on him again.

I am looking forward how his dream turns into reality - he will get probably more than he dreamed.



Author's Response:

Oh, yes.  He's in for it, now!  ;`)

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Date: July 03 2017 Title: Chapter 58: 'All-Nighter'

Very nice background chapter.

I guess Melanie is too tired when she comes home. So maybe she will just put or hang him somewhere. Or give him some special task while sleeping. 

Sometime in the future she could secretly tape him under Susie's table. So that he would helplesly forced to look into the crotch of his wife the whole day. :)



Author's Response:

Oh, Man! That's a great idea. 'Soooo, close - and yet, unable to get to her! His only hope, just out of reach...