Great so far! Anastasia makes a compelling argument. It seems that Beth will see the value in violent methods, but will she also learn to enjoy it the way Ann does? I sure hope so!

I love when a giant is friends with one tiny and does fucked up stuff to other tinies. Maybe Beth will take the lead in suggesting crueler punishments as she grows more comfortable with everything? Or even take an active role during a punishment?

I really like how “Bloody” Ann can be. The deep fry scenario is excellent. I hope we get full scenes like that! Does Ann always execute, or will she just mutilate for lesser offenses?

This is exactly the kind of fucked up stuff I come to this website to read.

Would like to see more of Lester. I hope he gets an apology. Mary’s violence up to this point is mostly “justifiable” from her point of view, but I think even she knows that not standing up isn’t a good enough reason.

The comparisons with Victoria were great. I also loved the imagery of Mary’s abs being the only separation from her stomach. I hope that’s revisited after she swallows someone, with someone outside her listening in.

I love the psychological intimidation from Mary. It would be cool to see her ordering Tainys or Minis to hurt or fuck each other. Like force Victoria to let Fred dominate her.

Mary is a wonderful character! The relationship with Judy is fascinating. Keep up the good work!

Great chapter! I like how you balance Mary’s acts of cruelty against her more reasonable relationships with her friends and family. The way you write her thought process and her conversations about power dynamics are what really elevate the story.

Victor is not a very interesting character so far, but I like Fred a lot! Watching Mary orchestrate everything was awesome!

Regarding Judy, you previously wrote “In those games she could be a queen who decided the fate of the victims, … or even a victim, camouflaged among the others, listening to their plans to escape and savoring their pain and fear.” I would love to see either of those scenarios written out.

I’m still #TeamLester. I realized that he has grown up his whole life without fear thanks to Mary’s seal, unlike Judy who I assume at one point was vulnerable. How does that affect his personality? How does it affect his relationships? Are people jealous of his status?

You’ve written several times that Mary feels very protective of her family. I want to see this in action. We haven’t seen Mary actually get mad yet, and I wonder what she would do to someone who tried to hurt her mom or brother. Maybe a relative of someone she killed seeking revenge?

Does Mary always go for the kill, or does she ever deliberately maim, cripple, blind, etc.?

Keep it up!

Great chapter! I loved how Mary hyped herself up, and how quickly it wavered when she thought Victor was scared. I’m not a fan of animal stuff but the scene was well-written.

Happy to see the return of flashbacks! You do a good job of integrating them into the story. I would love to see more flashbacks of a younger Mary testing her power and wiping out some families along the way.

Next chapter sounds exciting!

Excellent chapter! The “little Mary” concept was clever and well-executed. I loved how you reintroduced Judy and how her relationship with Mary is changing. Poor Victor :(

That was intense and kind of sad. I think the scene was really well-written, but I found it surprisingly hard to connect with a domination scene where the dominant person isn’t into it. I think it worked best at the end when Mary directly orders him to destroy Julia’s corpse, involving herself in the action instead of lurking.

Looking forward to seeing how this ends! Any new stories in the works?

Good one-shot! I loved the creativity of methods. I’ve never thought of using cigarette smoke to kill tinies! The individual deaths felt a little rushed. Some victim POV could help with that.

Interesting and well-written. You do good world building in a very natural way. The characters seemed a bit muted - is Charles really so jaded to violence to barely react to people being eaten? Is this a commentary on capitalism?

From a smut angle, I’d love to read Charles suggest horribly cruel yet practical ideas for Clara to implement.

Excellent so far! I really enjoy Jen and Kara’s dynamic. You’ve done a good job making their progression believable. I hope Kara continues to get corrupted and listens to lots more people screaming inside Jen, but I also like that she’s standing up to her.

I love Kara’s growing realization of the physical power she now possesses through her relationship with Jen.

They’re so cute together! The intimacy of this sex scene was definitely worth the wait.

I liked how you show Jen’s mouth as both a nightmare for most but heaven for Kara. You could give the same treatment to the rest of Jen’s body. Give us a POV of some poor Lilliputian soldier for whom Jen’s pussy is actually the big scary monster that’s going to eat him up. Show Jen’s fingers crushing or contorting someone then giving Kara a gentle massage.

I want to find out exactly how many Lilliputians Jen can fit up there. I wonder if Kara would like to see that too? Would Kara be comfortable with Jen adding her victims to their lovemaking?

Can’t wait to read more!