Your story has a nice pace, and your writing can be what I call beautiful. It's nice, sort of peaceful, still giving us the thrills of the actions it's narrating.

I'd just suggest to keep related chapters together in the same story. There are some stories of yours that are just direct, single chapter continuations of other stories of yours. I know, there are lots of reasons it would be better to split some stories in smaller stories than in multiple chapters, but I don't think your stories fit those reasons. They're like chapters trying to stand out as full stories. They're still good of course, but I think that they would fit better as chapters in a single story.

Wow...! It's hard to see people reading a story and calling the MC their 'favorite giantess'. Your story not only just did it (see the reviews), but also deserved it! It was superb, from head to toe! One of the most detailed stories I have ever read here, and this added to the whole fun, mostly in the impressive, immersive vore scenarios!

The story, being cruel, still tried to give the reader, imo, some emotional connection, mostly with Stacy herself, but also with some other characters. I can say it considering the scene where she was almost raped, or when Tom gave himself as sacrifice to be eaten  (my gosh, that part made me cry some tears ;_;, I had even to take a rest from the story to keep reading or I'd have ended with a broken heart!).

Well, I'm too softhearted and I felt connected to the tinies, thus feeling the terror Stacy imprinted on them as she played and killed them all, despite also enjoying a lot her actions, mostly the ones in which tinies ended up eaten and deliciously digested :D. So, for the same reason, Chapter 12 was a very surprising twist! At first I thought the goddess was going to truly  revenge her dead tinies but in the end she was just having her own little fun, as she just gave Stacy a trip into her digestive tract and nothing more (which was, by far, nothing compared to all the things Stacy did to the tinies), restoring her in the end and even giving her the man who was about to rape her. That final scene, girl!! It makes me wonder what Stacy became after her torturing experience inside the goddess' stomach... maybe Stacy didn't learn the lesson and is the same, or she's just revenging herself for being almost raped... or the goddess gave her the 'mission' to eat and torture shrunken bad dudes the way she did to tinies, giving the world a refresh against bad people and also providing Stacy, the goddess' 'favorite toy', some way of enjoying her strong pred, cruel nature. The open possibilities are so diverse! I ofc have my favorite possibility, but it's just me, I'll just wait and see what happens next...

About the writing, it's perfect. The organic details, the feelings described in many words, not to a boring point but in an enriching way of giving the reader a perfect vision of what's happening, without taking from him the delight of imagining many other details by not describing them to an absolute total extent... for example, many times the story showed in precise details how Stacy felt and what she was even able to hear while a couple tinies were being digested inside her belly... and at the same time, the scene would show her talking with another tinies which weren't eaten or stepped on already, making me wonder how it would be like to be able to feel and hear the tinies being digested and at the same time having to deal and talk to other tinies... like the clash of two worlds, one outside her body... and other inside, without even having to change scenes and POVs, everything together.

Gosh, I wrote too much, better stop now lol. I'm not thaaaaaat much into cruel stories but this one was excellent!

Hahaha, despite being on the cruel side, I actually found this story to be more funny than cruel! OK, sort of cruel, but also funny. They’d be better just leaving the giantess sleeping in peace...

I honestly thought some of them would live and deliver to the king’s brother the wishes but... well, there’s something bigger (and dangerous) on the way to the colony now! Is this a hint for a continuation? :)

Kudos also for the scene where Ernoullet is still stuck inside the giantess’ esophagus, trying to cut his way free and she just gulped more times until he went down her stomach. Many things were happening and I was truly thinking he was already a goner, this was interestingly unexpected! In the end he became a goner anyway hahaha.

Omg, what a wonderful story! I really enjoyed it head to toe, but what else to expect from a Greenanon's story?

I had some different expectations when I first saw Quinn and even thought Derrick was being too naive, but the story went showing little by little their reasons and well, the ending couldn't be better! I also enjoyed how Penelope went to jail in this story, it's pretty rare for evil girls to deal with the consequences of their acts in most stories and this was surely something refreshing lol.

I somehow hoped already for Quinn and derrick forming a couple, but Kelly and Iris was new, and also pretty unexpected, as Kelly had so strong traumas...

The only thing I found a bit out of place is that Kelly and iris' relationship grew a bit too fast, considering the level of Kelly's traumas and previous bad experiences. But I can totally understand, given the format of the story. I'd probably do the same if it was me writing that story (if I had a talent like yours to write, I mean lol!)

Aaaaaaaand... the most important lesson this story tells us: “the cops always come at the end.” Hahaha so true!

Oooowwwwww!!! Such a great story! I loved the plot, the way you developed the situations between Harrison and Katie... but at the same time I am feeling just ruined lol! It's because I was drafting the same thing, for real!! Despite my story having obviously different details and a different world building (the cat-girl and mouse-boy where college friends instead of office rivals, he didn't bully her, as they had fun together with her new characteristics... and two available endings, to write some), most of the plot was SO similar that I am honestly discouraged to finish it, so to the recycle bin it goes :( . Really, even the name of the girl was the same: Katie, for the same reason: a pun with the nickname Kitty which she had on her after the transformation... (the story was even to be called 'Katie became a Kitty!')

No, it's not your fault, nor mine's, it happens lol, This is the second time we sort of have the same idea, but this time I didn't write it before lol. And your story is just great, really, I am not envy of having you writing it, I am actually very happy (despite feeling a bit sad for not being able to use my idea now...), as your story stands among many stories that use a similar plot. I loved the interaction between the two and was surprised to see that she recovered him in time and is even going to group meetings to see him as a friend and not food...

And, browsing your list, I see that you have yet another new vore-centric story... may I welcome you to the Vore side of the force? :D

10/10 of course!

Wow, for a first try this story is really awesome! No worries about the Google automatic translation, it didn't make you story less enjoyable because of the mistakes that automatic translator puts on the story. Of course there are grammar errors and such, but many readers here may have the time and will to help you, maybe one of them reaches you out to give you any needed help. I also don't speak English natively and you can find some mistakes in my texts, no matter how hard I try to find and correct my errors and even use Grammarly to help me with text exactness.

About the story itself, the 'drunken girlfriend swallowing her boyfriend' is a nice scenario that never grows old or tiring! As many stories out there, your story also used this theme very well, and the rising tension with the roleplay growing more closer to a dangerous ending was thrilling in its own way, mostly because it happened with a (supposedly*) loving couple.

If you don't mind constructive criticism, the only things I found to be a bit different to what one would normally expect in situations like that are: 1. (*) the little care Agatha shows about her boyfriend after she realizes she digested him. She already shows that little care right before and some little time after swallowing him in her wine, but as she was really drunk, it could be just the alcohol talking. But, after she sleeps and wakes up, realizing she really digested her boyfriend, I would expect her to show some more regret as she literally killed her loved one. Except of course if she didn't love him as much as I thought she did (the reason I used an asterisk when I wrote about them being a loving couple - her final thoughts about him put it under true doubt). This was a bit unclear for me in the story and I ended up not knowing if she just had an unexpected/unfit behavior or if she really didn't love him in the end and his digestive death was just a memory to be forgotten someday for her. And 2. the time digestion took was a bit too fast, lol! Three hours! Yeah, some paople have a really fast metabolism (and I am myself one of them lol), so we can have people going to the bathroom to do their businesses twice a day, but eating something and pooping it out in just three hours... well, usually it takes something between twelve and twenty hours, normally... again, maybe she has a really really fast metabolism, or her digestive tract didn't agree with what she ate and forced her to put everything out really soon, but when it happens, the waste usually comes still liquefied as the large bowels don't have enough time to re-absorb the water from the many juices used during the digestive processes... 

But, believe me, these are just two points I thought that would be nice to write about, and by no means they are saying your story is bad, no! Your story is great, and I really enjoyed reading it! I even had the expectation of the guy surviving in the end, despite knowing it wouldn't happen.

Well, very nice!