Dude, you are killing it with your stories. You very cemented yourself as top-tier writer on this site. 

The best one-shots are always the ones that make you wish they were more than just one shots. While being incredibly satisfying the characters in this story made me wish for more.

You're very skilled at writing and could probably get a publishing deal for non-fetish writing. Hell, if you tweaked some of this story you could probably get a publishing deal by a more-mainstream publishing company. (Of course what you want to do is up to you, but just know that you're really good at this.)

This was my favorite of all the chapters, I could something say on a lot of them(The first two with the Delinquents was my second favorite), but I'm going to just focus on this one.

I definitely think this chapter deserves 10 stars, and disagree with the rating of the other review. I think this was your strongest chapter that displayed the most humanity in your characters. It was really interesting seeing how Lauren and Zeke interacted and how Zeke began to overcome his prior experience. You didn't put in too much from his past and portrayed it pretty well. 

On my own I've been writing a story with similar themes(but for college students, that will be released a while from now, it's 21K words right now and when it's done I'll be releasing it by chapter), and there's another story that has the main female character named Lauren(which is kind of slice of life like Kacey and Jake). Your writing has inspired me for my own. Of these chapters, I've reread this one a few times and each time have loved reading it. 

I'd love a brief sequel of the two to see how they have progressed. 

You truly have a gift for good dialect in your dialogue, you already proved that in Tiny Through Time and this just adds further proof. I hope that Sloane continues to be just a little oblivious of how things really are for a little bit. I'd like to see you continue that humiliation tag. Maybe his wallet fell out and didn't get shrunken so she finds it and just spends his money on stuff before she finally lets him talk.

It seems like he'll have to be calm when talking to her otherwise she'll just tell him to chill out. Hopefully she'll eventually bring him to her ear so he can explain things to her because she does seem good hearted, if somewhat not connecting the dots.

I love the concept and can't wait to see more. I don't know if you're planning to do anything with her bikini bottoms, but I'd love to see a little bit of butt play. Hope you continue.

Fantastic. There are a lot of reviews I'd like to give on some of the stories/new additions you've written, but I've been too busy for a little bit to do so. I will get to giving a lot of my feedback(especially my thoughts on "A New Queen") as I make my way through your remarkable catalogue and finish what has been sucking my time.

This was my favorite part of the whole set. The line that solidified its greatness in my mind was the insurance bit. That was just grade A comedy. I loved the interactions between the duchess and the giantess. A usually dominant girl discovering that she likes being submissive to the giantess is amazing. I'd love to see both sides of that explored with the giantess being shrunk down and being used by the duchess and the elf and of course the duchess being the 'pet in the sheets'. The miscommunication between characters about the fatality of being eaten as one character is going to be eaten is something you've done a couple of times, but this one was the funniest because of the instant attack by the duchess. I hope you do expand upon it.

I don't know if you remember that I mentioned I was writing a slice of life style story inspired a bit by your style. But, I released it about a week ago, I don't know if you can see any of your influences yet, but when the two get to playing together there are some ideas that are absolutely inspired by your stories. Obviously, you don't have to read it, but if you do, I'd love to know what you think.

https://giantessworld.net/viewstory.php?sid=11746

Holy Shit man!

First of all, dammit, I keep meaning to write my review for "Welcome to Hell" and then write a review here to let you know about that review, but apparently you are the most consistently fast typer on this website and I'll just post my review for that story tomorrow, because I don't want you to start the next Act before I get to review this. Man you can give Speedy Gonzalez a run for his money. Honestly, it's unreal. Seriously, what is your typing speed? (also you definitely use keyboard shortcuts right, it's one very useful thing you pick up from programming).

Now onto this review. Take your goddamn crown right now. Not only are you just killing it in enemies to lovers, but you're killing it everywhere. You can see the chinks in Eve's armor really start to form in October when he explains why he watches that movie. As you continue each of your characters' actions make more sense in the greater context and build on the previous character moments. I love that Evan has always had that fighting spirit in him. His heart will take him far. And I keep wanting to learn more about him and Laurie. It's likely that he will wind up with Eve, but from Laurie's interaction with Eve in this last chapter it seems like Laurie might not see him as platonically as he sees her. Overall, just it's awesome.

One thing you could incorporate, if you were willing to go through the hassle, is to Italicize a character's thoughts. One specific place is at the bottom of November you have "It might still be a fun weekend after all, she decided." Instead you could write "It might still be a fun weekend after all." after her previous line of dialogue. The only issue is that this website doesn't correctly copy Italicizations so you have to redo it when you post it here. It's a source of irritation for sure, but I put up with it because I think it works with my flow. I think it's a way to just improve the overall reading experience of a story when this is incorporated, but to each their own. 

Also, I don't know if you saw, but I wrote a story that was inspired by "Sharing is Caring" and I hope you don't mind that I took some inspiration from you.

Both 2 and 3 are awesome. My only thing that I didn't address is that in both of the two he's so small that he might not have a chance at them becoming aware because they wouldn't know to look for him. (I've seen micro stories where being super small worked because the women involved knew how small the guy was). I'd like it to eventually become aware in 2 or 3 with the girls being able to do a ton without the guy dying(but I like aware and non-fatal so that's me).

2 seems like it will have more aware playing with the sister and cousin.

3 seems more unaware at the start and a greater chance for him growing back at the end. The stepsisters also seem to have at least a bit of dislike for Brad and like they'd enjoy playing with his tiny form. I hope that like Shrunken Babysitter the girls will be doing butt stuff with him and that he can take a lot. 

I think I'd enjoy 3 the most, but 2 as well, seems good. My vote is for either 3 or 2, if one is close to winning mark it for that one. I'm looking forward to you expanding.

Well you have once again proven that not only do you have writing chops, you have the damn tenderloins of writing.

Dear goodness man, did you marry the muse? You're unreal. 

If I spent the time writing everything I liked about the story so far, I wouldn't be able to go to sleep tonight. So I'll try to be brief(relatively).

Love all the side characters, they are truly awesome. The small part with the ship that we never saw again with the Zetan male, was great.

Jolene, rawr, she's one hell of a lady. I'd be interested in getting punished by her.

Princess Nea has had a fantastic character arc. I was wondering how I would end up rooting for her. The best thing about her is that it's clear she was always misguided, never truly evil.

Question, and it's cool if the answer is as the story requires, but I'm a bit unclear on how durable someone is when shrunken. Is it something that requires powerful stomping(with armor or something) at a couple of inches. Is it also that Zetans are just more durable all around. Lots of people died from getting squished, but Kurt was in between Nea's toes(lucky guy) getting squeezed by them(again lucky guy).

Was Kurt at all inspired by Captain James Tiberius Kirk who also has escapades with green women.

That scene with Smith at the top of this chapter gave me a funny mental image. Kurt decides to not only be a complete Earthling, but a complete American. So instead of whatever royal consort attire he should wear, he shows up to the big celebration in a black leather jacket, tight black jeans, fingerless black gloves, a bandanna just for the hell of it(maybe even stripes painted on his face too) dressed straight out of the 80s just to have fun with the Zetan expectations. 

I swear, Faen better survive! Don't you dare kill her; I will throw some serious hands if you do. 

This is the start to a really great story and an even better relationship between the two characters. I so want to see their relationship progress and the obvious increase in affection and affinity towards and for each other. That gentle tag better be accurate. 

Your description is good and paints enough detail without it being overwhelming. Something that might streamline is in the time jumps to put an asterisk * instead of just an extra break between them. Also, it's a pain on this website, and you have to redo it once its pasted here, but italicizing thoughts is a great way to weave in thoughts naturally.

This story is a lot better than I thought it would be and I'm really enjoying it. I'm liking the slow development of Alice's backbone and her gradually increasing confidence. Naturally the first guy she'll be comfortably around will be Remy(both at small and full size) and it will progress into being unafraid of whatever life throws at her. The way I see this story is her eventually gaining the strength to stand up to her mom and prove that she is in charge of her own life.

I was hoping to see her give Remy his punishment for trying to prank her and for it to be a catalyst for her standing up fo herself. But this ended up pretty well. I was also hoping to see Nikki get involved and it's plausible she will since she and Alice seem to be developing a good friendship. I also really loved Lori immediately dishing a punishment out to Remy. 

The characters feel a lot more like real people in this than I had originally thought they would be. Remy and Lori are interacting like real healthy siblings would in this situation and its perfect.

(I don't know if you have any thoughts on butt content, I know its not in this story's tags, personally its my favorite and I'd enjoy it in the story, but if you don't have any oh well, it is your story after all).

This, I love this one. Please continue man. It's just perfect. Excellent expansion of the greentext lore. Will her name fit the trend of peaches/apples/etc. or is that just a garter lamia custom? I'm hoping to see more of this.