Wow! this is very interesting! Loving to be small around adult women is popular and has lots of stories. But, you have been very specific about John's fantassy which involvs his daughter but puts a fine line before it gets too awkward. I absolutely loved the part where John stands infront of the height chart and looks up at his daughter's height mark, his wish of having to stand on tip toes to kiss his little daughter, wearing her hand me downs, imagination of being even smaller and being able to sit on his daughter's lap .... very well detailing! Before it could get too awkward, it was very well managed!

This story at the moments is hanging at a very high note. I badly wish to see the continuation of this story! How will the father-daughter relation be when his wife and daughter returns? Will he be even smaller? What will happen when his daughter will grow? How the relationship will develop with his daughter's growing?

And - How did this specific fantassy developed in him? Was it from some incident from his childhood? What about his family beofore marriage? I mean parents, brothers, sisters, nieces ... etc.

Hell this can be like a psychological novel!