Giantess World

Penname: Hollow [Contact] Real name: Jake

Member Since: March 25 2011
Membership status: Member
Bio:

18 year old male living in AZ, into Giantesses and giants ;)

Stories by Hollow [8] Reviews by Hollow [44] Challenges by Hollow [0] Challenges by Hollow [0] Challenges by Hollow [0] Hollow's Favorites [4]

Reviews by Hollow

The Spa Job by dudeduderson2000 Rated: PG

[Reviews - 23]

Summary:

A story that Smushed Boy on Deviantart asked me to write, here is a link to his art: http://smushedboy.deviantart.com/

You take on the character of Kyle who works at a spa that shrinks people down for the female clientele. One of your regulars rents you for the night and adventure ensues.

Categories: Teenager (13-19), Mature (40-49), Feet
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 21780 Read Count: 130914

[Report This] Published: July 16 2013 Updated: November 28 2013

Reviewer: Hollow Signed

Date: August 09 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Working at the Spa

Awesome story, I like the focus on feet so far, and the size of Kyle, though you may want to consider a different rating than G if you know what I mean heh

-Jake

Author's Response:
Hey thanks! I tried to change it once, but it didn't go through, I think I've got it working now. Feet are pretty much my main fetish, so that's going to be the main focus in this story.

A Weekend Alone by ShrunkenGuy666 Rated: R

[Reviews - 3]

Summary:

Note: This is a completely giant male/shrunken female story involving mouthplay, vore and genital play. If any of this offends you. DO NOT READ!

I've been wanting to write some kind of giant male/shrunken female story for a while now so here it is. Different from my usual stuff but I hope you like it! :D

Rate and comment if you do!

A very short story: Best friends Mikey and Ellie go on a trip for the weekend, but when Mikey accidentally shrinks Ellie, things start to get a little hot.

Categories: Teenager (13-19), Body Exploration, Entrapment, Giant, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: M/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1152 Read Count: 35505

[Report This] Published: August 14 2013 Updated: August 14 2013

Reviewer: Hollow Signed

Date: August 14 2013 Title: Chapter 1: A Weekend Alone

Alrighty, so here goes, I like this story, a lot. You have some great dialouge, no spelling errors, and your descriptions are perfect. My only problem with this chapter is, that even though it was a dream sequence and doesn't really count as an actual event in the story, it still felt like I was just thrown in and suddenly pulled back out. Maybe for the actual interactions with the soon to be shrunken ellis you take things a bit more slowly? Just a suggestion of course, and honestly I love your writing style, on top of it all you're going into a scenario that almost no one on here does, so I applaud you sir, keep this up!

-Jake

Author's Response:
Thank you for the review, I'll take all your points into consideration for when I do full stories, but as for the shortness, this was intended to be a in/out affair with it being such a short story. I only posted it to see if anyone would like a full story involving ideas like this.

Thank you for the very valid points and again, thanks for the review and I'm glad you enjoyed the story! :D

Stress Relief by Size Master Rated: X

[Reviews - 4]

Summary:

A man living in the future uses a computer to recreate a virtual school to release his built up job stress.

Categories: Feet, Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Vore, Violent, Mouth Play, Giant, Crush, Couples , Adventure, Gentle
Characters: None
Growth: Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: M/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5447 Read Count: 47615

[Report This] Published: August 15 2013 Updated: August 18 2013

Reviewer: Hollow Signed

Date: August 16 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Other than the huge walls of text, I found this to be quite a good read. My preferences would be that he eats more students, and maybe leaves a few stranded on his erect cock while he searches for more victims. Also some feet action from the giant.

Sumo Wrestler by xrt125 Rated: PG [Reviews - 2]

Summary: Susan wakes up to find herself tiny between 2 sumo wrestlers and is accideantly taken away by one of them.
Categories: Unaware, Butt, Feet, Giant, Toilet
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: M/f
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 583 Read Count: 6500

[Report This] Published: November 16 2013 Updated: November 16 2013

Reviewer: Hollow Signed
Date: November 17 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Sumo ring

Okay, I absolutely hate people who review this way. Do you think this encourages him/her? Jesus christ man, be supportive otherwise they won't ever write again. Okay, anyways, what he/she said may be rude and blunt, but he/she is not wrong. Your story moves way to fast and each scene lacks detail. I'm thrown from one scene to the next before I even understand what's happening. Keep trying though!

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