Reviewer: ReclaimerChief17 Signed
Date: November 17 2021
Title: Chapter 16: Little Errand
Wow what a return! I think I can speak for almost everyone when saying this is probably your best chapter yet. Not only do we finally get to meet Susan but we get some nice backstory, nice size comparisons between her and the kids she used to bully from the bracket difference, and ofc her ultimate endgame. Absolutely perfect! Ahhh you have no idea how good it feels to have a great giantess story back in this site again. It’s been a while. How tall is Susan btw? Is she like Casey at 24ft?
My prediction: I think after Susan is eventually beaten, Casey is gonna take control of the company and because drew helped her, she’ll realize that not only was she wrong about him and tinies in general, she’ll prob offer him a job to work in the company to help make it up to him to reinstate back into the higher brackets maybe the same height as his roommate so they can both begin dating ;). But we shall see. Also that shrinking gun should be illegal no? Only the people in charge of the bracket Records should have jurisdiction of growing and shrinking. So that’s another ground of trouble against her.
also I see you took the Twitter advice lolol. I think you gotta follow back to allow DMs between the two people so I sent ya a follow request! :)
Author's Response: Wow, thank you, very kind words!
Glad you enjoyed all the little components of the chapter, though I wonder if you caught onto a subtle name drop during one of Susan's flashbacks.
Susan is a foot taller than Casey, so 25ft.
Interesting prediction, that's assuming Casey is actually a good person deep down, so I guess we'll see.
The shrinker is definitely illegal, what Susan has is merely an early prototype of an attempt to commercialise the product, it is by no means meant to be in the hands of a regular citizen. Susan has a whole list of felonies adding up against her name doesn't she.
Haha yeah I did, I figured I probably should have a place where people can contact me, especially if I ever start doing commissions. But yep, I opened DM's to anyone and followed back.