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You thought you would be attending a regular party. That is, until you are shrunken down and added to the hors d'oeuvres. Will you be able to make it through the night unscathed? Hint: no.

This is the first story I have ever done in second person, and it was a lot of fun to do it. Please note that because of this there may be some errors, however I will be around to fix them if they're pointed out.

At this point I consider this ~80% complete. It's entirely readable in this form, although the intro is weaker than I'd like. At some point I'll do a re-write of the intro, and add a few short alternate endings with different girls. Brooke is meant to be the main component of the story anyway, and is my favourite ending out of those I have planned.

Rated: R
Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Entrapment, Mouth Play, New World Order, Vore Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 5561 Read: 5712
Published: August 11 2016 Updated: August 11 2016
Story Notes:

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


1. Introduction & Brooke's End by RedFractal [Reviews - 2] starstarstarstarstar (5561 words)