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Reviewer: rubber Signed [Report This]
Date: June 05 2009 11:55 AM Title: Damper

amazing story

Reviewer: TinyMan23 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 02 2009 3:08 PM Title: Damper

Oh god, this story is shaping up to be fantastic!

And Heidi living in greg's dollhouse, that's hot! 

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 02 2009 11:03 AM Title: Damper

Wow! And, I thought MY sub-plots could get Machiavellian!

So, where to start? Perhaps, that tantalizing bit about Greg's friends and family. Has Parvati given them a case of "...Wonderful Life?" I.e, Greg was never born? Nah! That kind of massive mind-wiping would probably have been noticed by the Head Witches.

So, I'll guess a magically forged note that claims he eloped to the South Seas (or something to that effect).

Then, there's Heidi's statement that some Head Witches "loathe that rule about owning humans." Does this mean some of them have a kinky domineering side (like Lily, or this newcomer Irene)? And, they wouldn't hate seeing that rule repealed? Might they even be planning an Aurora Realm coup d'etat?

I can only hope the next brilliant chapter provides some answers to these agonizing questions.

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