Date: October 24 2011 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 1
Thank you so much for "My Glorious Destiny by girlfood"
I do hope you will not think me patronizing, or somewhat over the top when I say that it is a the best vore story I have ever read.
Jen is shown to be a kind considerate woman, who displays sympathy and understanding towards her future meal, and is in no hurry to enjoy carrying out his desperate wish to be devoured by her. She knows that by making him wait, it will be so much more enjoyable for both of them when she finally condescends to do for him what he has asked. It is also much better for her to swallow a fully grown male, rather than a boy. Thank you again for brilliant
Thank you very much for your review Faceunder1. It is very kind of you. I'm glad you enjoyed the story and took the time to leave a note about what you like. I do think Jen's initial reluctance to consume anyone she deems to be making a hasty or childlike decision does make her a far more likeable character than she might be if she simply devoured people straight off. Thanks again!
Date: May 11 2008 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 1
Hi GF. Nice little story. Pleasant and straight-forward. You have, however, done better with others. At the end - the climax - it just seems a bit bland. It could use some more cathartic description, I suppose.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review Scrumptious. Yes, this could have done with some more work. I'll work on a better punch for the ending of my next story. :)
Date: April 20 2008 9:20 AM Title: Chapter 1
Yep, all the usual goodness is there, as expected! keep going, dude :-) !!
Author's Response: Thank you my very good friend! I am glad you are still activly posting yourself. Thanks for the review. I hope you are well :)