[Report This]Date: October 10 2019 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 4: #SorryNotSorry
Man, that was brutal at the end. What a way to go -- whacked by a whackjob.
Anyway, I was enjoying the narrative so much that I'd have liked to have seen you stretch it out a few more chapters, give Howard 'I think we may want different things' the Slave a few more interactions with Rachel and her roommate (surprised you didn't really bring in after the introduction), or again with Robin (who was a compelling character in the first couple chapters, so compelling that I was a bit shocked to see her at the end so coldly and remorselessly crush an already mutilated human being, and not only that but to deny that they were ever friendly toward each other and then to lay all the guilt on him -- the paraplegic).
In conclusion: great story and sorry to see it wrapped up so hastily. I'm enjoying your stuff.
[Report This]Date: October 10 2019 11:01 AM Title: Chapter 1: #ShrinkingForTheFirstTime
You’re back!
You’re one of my favourite writers on this site. I love your writing style and I feel your female characters are very real and believable.
Super hot concepts and I’m really, really enjoying where this one is going.
Amazing world building.
Date: October 02 2019 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 1: #ShrinkingForTheFirstTime
Amazing please keep it going !
Date: September 29 2019 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 1: #ShrinkingForTheFirstTime
Nice story
Date: September 26 2019 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 1: #ShrinkingForTheFirstTime
Love your other stories so i'm sure i'll love this too.
Date: September 25 2019 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 1: #ShrinkingForTheFirstTime
I'm hoping Howard ends up with his crush Robin rather than Rachel.
Date: September 25 2019 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 1: #ShrinkingForTheFirstTime
A very interesting concept. I'd go in the chamber.