Date: May 04 2021 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 5
Hey, I LOVED this story. Awesome job!
[Report This]Date: March 06 2020 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 5
Omg! This just keeps getting better and better!
Date: August 02 2019 6:52 AM Title: Chapter 5
Awesome buildup!
“AND HOW DOES IT FEEL STUCK BETWEEN MY BIG FINGERS?”
I love some handheld thrown in there. Also, with how closely she examined him, I find it hard to believe she didn’t see his erection... or maybe she did? Part of me wants her to so that she becomes even more convinced to keep him!
Keep up the good work!
[Report This]Date: July 18 2019 7:48 AM Title: Chapter 5
Typo time!
- obediance
- the size of a building face
- nose rand down
- airs (hairs)
- what is head (ahead)
- show (shoe)
and with that out of the way... omg I love her attitude!!! Good to see I'm not the only one :)
A bit weird to see she didn't tell him how big he is ("next we are trying 2x... maybe x/2"), I'll guess 1 inch until you see otherwise.
Good to see she didn't tell him how long it's going to be, or how many hours per day - will he find the courage to ask? does it depend on how useful he is? will competition with Sandra change her mind? So many goodies to think about!
Imho one of the things she should try is ask him to be annoying (bite, tickle, ...), to see at what size he's still big enough for her to notice he's being bad, but that's just random ramblings that come with that "I can't wait for more" feeling :D
Author's Response: Thanks man - I’ll try and get back to fix these typos. And I might include that suggestion of having him bite and tickle. I like it!