[Report This]Date: March 06 2020 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 4
Holy fucking shit!! O_O
Date: August 02 2019 6:47 AM Title: Chapter 4
Another amazing installment!
“He’d have to go through with it. He’d get shrunk down by his own mother. And he’d get stuffed in her shoes and trapped under her toes.”
This line summarizes it very well. It’s really hot.
“Although, it might be that I break you in a little too well.... Just imagine if I crush your sprit so much that you can’t function in the real world anymore. You’d end up begging me to keep you small and beneath pretty feet. But don’t worry, if it gets that bad, I promise, I’ll keep you tiny forever.”
Part of me really wants this to be foreshadowing! ;)
Now that he’s finally shrunk, I can’t wait for what happens next!
Date: July 18 2019 7:22 AM Title: Chapter 4
I'm not mentioning any typo in this chapter out of appreciation for how awesome she is.
I mean, even by how promising she looked, in this chapter she's better than I thought she could be! (too bad for the nylons).
[Report This]Date: July 17 2019 4:43 PM Title: Chapter 4
OMG Karen is awesome! The way she taunts and laughs at him is sublime.
Author's Response: Thank you! I have to admit, she is great to write!
[Report This]Date: July 17 2019 11:48 AM Title: Chapter 4
I am quite happy. This is an amazing start and I cannot wait for more! Excellent foundation laid, sir!
Author's Response: Thank you, really appreciate that.