Reviewer: hanssmith7670 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 14 2022 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 1

So glad to have you back and writing again! Love this story and all the great content! keep up the amazing work!

Reviewer: The Reviewer Signed [Report This]
Date: June 13 2022 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 1

am I dreaming? the great lord returned!!

Reviewer: fakeziggy Signed [Report This]
Date: April 22 2020 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 1

good thankyou !!!!!!!!!!!!!
he has a fetish
accident
good !!!

wish upon a star
i like it

thank you

Reviewer: Morcw Signed [Report This]
Date: December 18 2019 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 1

Amazing! I hope you continue :)

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed [Report This]
Date: December 02 2019 8:22 AM Title: Chapter 1

Littlelee wrote on giantesscity that he's just busy :D

Reviewer: 1mmtall Signed [Report This]
Date: September 22 2019 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 1

You are one of favourite artists from Giantess City. This story is one of my favourites, can’t wait for more!

Reviewer: WTH I Love This Signed [Report This]
Date: August 25 2019 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 1

@el_rooto
Thanks! I’ll check it out!

Reviewer: Toesify Signed [Report This]
Date: August 19 2019 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 1

It's amazing to see you back Littlelee! You've been missed!

This is an incredible story you've been working on and it's exactly what I'm into. Great build up so far - I love the whole backstory and motivations behind the characters. Fantastic job so far and I really hope you find time to write some more!

10/10 for me!

Author's Response: Thank you! It might be a little while between updates but I will keep adding to this when I can. Glad you are enjoying it :)

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed [Report This]
Date: July 17 2019 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 1

I'm firmly in non-bare-feet team, so I guess I'll be a little bit biased in my judgement of the candidates :D

 

That being said:

- 'No', Ms. Tate went on ("now")

- Karen was again in away -- even the dictionary didn't help here, so I hope it's a typo! :)

- Karen new

- once that resembled

 

Please don't take it the wrong way: ESL also means paying more attention to grammar, especially because I'm never 100% sure if it's a mistake on the writer's part or something I've had wrong all my life (I recently found out it's "whether or not", not "wether or not"...).

Also, you can't polish a t*rd, and nitpicking like this is a lot easier than writing carefully thought out comments :D

 

The story looks seriously good for now - just out of curiosity, given your activity with collages, did you think of anyone in particular as a reference for the characters?

<exits stalking mode>

Author's Response: There will definitely be quite a bit of non-bare-feet coming up. And yeah, I know there are typos etc. Unfortunately, my writing time in private (which I need for this) is hugely limited, so I need to knock out as much of the story as I can, when I’m able. I try to pick up the mistakes as I go but I just don’t have the opportunity for a proper edit. Maybe when the story is done I can go back though and give it a polish.

Reviewer: carnage Signed [Report This]
Date: July 17 2019 1:03 PM Title: Chapter 1

Hey man, love your stories! And this one is starting out awesome as well! Very well written, especially the dialougue imo. 

Looking forward to more!

 

Author's Response: Thanks, hope you continue to enjoy!