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Reviewer: kbDArt Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 04 2023 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 1

Seldom have I been more disappointed in a story as I am with this. For 3/4 of the story, this was a great erotic tale, well written, with a great villainess and her interesting young prey. But that 2nd shrinking just completely obliterated things for me and was against everything written about the girl's motivations up to that point. What sexual or actual hunger motivation could be quenched from eating a...crumb?  Personally, I'm thinking 1.5 to 2 inches is the perfect swallowing size, but I could live with the original shrinking to .75 inches. But now down to a crumb? Very disappointing.

I thought about rating this lower, but just felt that the bulk of the story was so good, that I couldn't go below a 6.

Reviewer: Her-chocolatebar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 27 2019 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 1

Omg!!! For me anyway... simply one of your best yet! :)
I was totally captivated from start to finish... feeling nothing but envy for a fortunate young male scientist!
Please write more of this flavour... and text me Julie's number hey? Hahaha :)

Author's Response:

Thanks for the read/review

Reviewer: InHerBelly Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 21 2019 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 1

This is perfect.



Author's Response:

Thanks much

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