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Reviewer: DrManhattan Signed [Report This]
Date: June 16 2009 4:31 PM Title: Out to lunch

Hey, you brought the cliff hanger back!

I like how naive Brittany is.  She couldn't imagine why someone would want to steal Bobby and make him their toy.  That means the thought never even crossed her mind.  That level of innocence is seldom seen in a giantess/shrinking story.

The rapport being built between Bobby and Brittany is pretty nice, too.  They aren't "getting to know each other", but they are definetly getting closer.  Being able to read how Brittany's presence is affecting Bobby through the first person perspective reinforces this sentiment.

Nice twist at the end of the chapter.  I certainly wasn't expecting to see Glen quite so soon.  I wonder what our heroic trio is going to do if they catch him and his friends.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 15 2009 1:18 PM Title: Out to lunch

So all those other competitors for "ownership" of Bobby were Brittany's fellow cheerleaders? Never saw that coming!

And, that goes double for the cliff-hanger with Glen. Fabulous!

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