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Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 24 2024 9:22 PM Title: Bigger Problems

Good story, tune667.

Thanks for making Chapters 6 and 7 a little longer. The first five chapters were awfully short (to constitute real chapters, they should be at least 3000 words). There is also some need for improvement to grammar.


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