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Reviewer: Glaazius Signed [Report This]
Date: March 08 2019 4:00 PM Title: Stabilisation | All Goddesses

Hey great story!
Just read a few chapters.
Wonderful idea with those goddesses ruling a universe and I love the immense power they have.
Its also very well written.

Keep it up!

Author's Response:

Thank you very much, I have been working on my writing style since TitanTheia joined me as a co-author, and generally having a proof-reader helps a lot on that front. Though I still hope to improve more in the future!

Reviewer: Last_one_33 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 05 2019 8:21 PM Title: Stabilisation | All Goddesses

Like how Theia kept her 'mortal' limits in the last chapter, that has to have an impact on her worshipers.  Her devotion to them will hopefully spur their devotion to her.  goddess and worshiper bringing the other to ever greater hieghts.  Maybe her followers connect with her using the lake of blood she left behind, maybe they alter the shrine to just three goddesses (making Sarah the most pronounced and grand to get away with it, but honoring in their view Theia the most, and having likely heard how Arianna is like her in character giving her some props two while definitely either getting rid of Alyassa or mock her in a clever way the rest what they can get away with).

Having read what Arianna may go through, prehaps she hears what Theia was willing to endure and endures what she thought was unedurable for the sake of her people.  Then seeks out Theia and one thing leads to the other and they share some goddess level joy(Arianna) and techinque(Theia) with the other and thier 'tributes'.  They work together, Arianna convince Sarah as goddess of life that more life is good for her, and Theia on Cessi with logic and building.  Both use 'arts' to slowly move the goddess of the wild to calmer states and an eye toward befriending her.

good story so far can't wait to see what you to have in store.



Author's Response:

Hey there, TitanTheia here; I'm really glad you liked that I kept Theia's mortal limits. I feel having her able to suffer consequences like that allows me to create more compelling moments with her, which would also resonate with the hearts of the mortals around her. I'll definitely address both the blood pool and the human's reverence for Theia in future chapters. (Although I should point out, that Theia would probably disapprove of them dismantling the shrines to the others - she respects her sisters too much to allow that.)

As for letting Arianna and Theia couple up; I'm sure they'll bond over their shared love for mortals, and maybe edge towards intimacy over it, but I can't promise that they'll actually "get together". (At least not according to the current plan we have.) Though I'm confident they'll still try to work with the others to create a kinder universe all around ... well, as soon as Fiona is done with her.

On a final note, I noticed that while going through your past reviews that you don't give out full 5 star reviews very often, so I (and JustForTribute) are sincerely grateful for the amount of stars you've given us! Thank you!

Reviewer: Ugly one Signed [Report This]
Date: March 02 2019 11:42 AM Title: Stabilisation | All Goddesses

Like the previous review would like a 'gentler', 'kinder' and 'more loving' universe evolve with either Arianna and/or Theia moving things and being ahead of the less kind/more cruel 'goddesses'. 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review Ugly one!

The Pantheon is a 2/3/2 split at moment between Good/Neutral/Evil although there are plans underway to shift the balance around! It may be a few chapters before the "more loving" universe shines through but have faith in TitanTheia's writing :)

Reviewer: Bigdawg K Signed [Report This]
Date: February 28 2019 7:28 PM Title: Stabilisation | All Goddesses

With Charlotte being a cruel B most of her storyline, would like a bit of a pendulum swing.  With Arianna and Theia  with their simular views becoming a base of power.  That each begin to find ways to augment their powers beyond their fellow goddess without the need of killing tributes (Theia  though tech and devolpment of her followers, plus maybe converting some the souls of the 'grey' into more power for herself, her priestesses and her followers, some formula that she as an engineer has figured out on just how many souls need to be returned to maintain the universe and she uses a couple of the more dark gray souls to strength herself, her followers and her allies so that many more may live, live better and prehaps end the tribute system).  Arianna basically 'Power of Love', that she gains power the stronger Love is and has Theia 'help' there.

Later Sarah realizes they are a threat to her postion as Matarich confronts them and over time is as 'goddess of life' brought on their side, and with Ella's slow taming as she becomes more and more sane she aligns with them as well as maybe Cassi.  Basically they move further and further from the cruelty they  particed and what a functional, happy and prosperous universe that they serve rather one is tormented and twisted like the one under Charlotte that only served her.Long term Arianna's power of love absorbs the other good powers, and she put down the remaining goddesses and gains the power to create entire universes and in time confronts the 'transcendent' Charlotte and kicks her butt with 'love'.

Thats what I would like to see.  Thank you.



Author's Response:

Good Evening BigDawg K!

TitanTheia and I were already outlining a bunch of future stories that all leaned towards a gentler universe, but with your suggestion in mind, we re-arranged a bit to give Arianna a more prominent role in the future. Also TitanTheia liked your idea of empowering Theia through human innovation. She'll be sure to include that in future chapters.

I will probably be the one splicing in the cruel GTS stuff as thats always been my thing but Theia writes wonderful gentle goddess and with her tempering the edge I think the story has a bright future, This review has moved Arianna up in my personal writing priorities although I warn you I have a pretty dark plot for her to overcome in the near future!

Reviewer: TitanTheia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 16 2019 2:54 PM Title: Stellar | Cassi

Oh, the idea of living lipstick is absolutely divine! I love it!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like it!

I am inspired to write more stories in this series thanks to feedback like this!

Reviewer: Joseph Micheal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 14 2019 3:22 PM Title: Stabilisation | All Goddesses

Well, this is off to an interesting start. It's certainly interesting to see how the world works with these goddesses and priestesses. I'm looking forward to learning more about it, and seeing the contrast between the personalities of the various goddesses. One question I had was this, where do the mortals go when they die? Do they all go to Alyssa? Are they spread out among whomever they worshipped the most? I'm just curious how that works. Looking forward to future chapters, and great job on what you've done so far!



Author's Response:

Hello Joeseph!
I spent a while thinking about this and its been decided that Alyssa is going to be more like Hell and Arianna Heaven. To find out what happens to the majority, TitanTheia will me touching on this subject soon when she starts her new story in this universe! So keep an eye out for her work hopefully next week!

Reviewer: Coldsnow Signed [Report This]
Date: February 11 2019 5:44 PM Title: Stabilisation | All Goddesses

Looking like its a great start to a hopefully long new series. 


I enjoyed reading about how each goddess tried to get  the priestesses to join them by changing them a different way. I hope that these changes to the priestesses change what kind of power they each have like say Sarahs fairy priestesses have the ability to shrink other living things just like how fairys are pranskters pretending to be weak and small untill someone tries to take advantage of their size and shrinks them.


Maybe also have a section showing each of the goddess setting up their old room or maybe take a world to be their seat of power and changing them to reflect their new status such as Sarah making a nature like area/world but it should be whatever really matchs their personality and roles. 

 
Also, I can see Fiona setting up something like a battle royal style punishment for people who took the Goddesss name in vain. Where people fight to the death on different parts of her body with different weapons spread throught the area and  only the last person standing having a chance at redemption or not depending on her mood. The shrinking circle from those style of games could be her circling her finger around the area or it could be her priestesses walking around the area crushing any people still in the removed play area.


Another idea that came to mind is Arianna stoping natural disasters to save people praying for help with some body part or bodily function. Such as stoping a tusnami by steping in front of it . Spitting/ drooling on an erupting volcano to put it out. Drawing a line between two countires with her finger to create a chasm to prevent a war. And many other causal display of power that can cause awe and worship in the people she saves.


Can't wait to see where the series goes.


Keep up the great work.

 



Author's Response:

Hi Coldsnow!

Thanks for the great review! I will be going through the domains in turn with each Goddess! I have outlines already down.
The new priestesses also have there array of gifts to be exploited as each story unfolds!

Fiona wouldnt need an excuse to setup a Battle Royale! I love that idea though! I've etched it into the list of possibilities depending on how things emerge! It has some possibilities!

Arianna makes an appearance in the new Chapter, I'm setting her up as quite possibly the only gentle giantess I've ever written, I would love to know how you feel that works after you read it!

Chapter 2 is out now and 3 is coming probably this weekend! Check out TitanTheia's addition to the same Story Universe in her story Her Architectural Wonders (PoGU) ! for more worldbuilding, She will be moving into the mainline story soon!

Reviewer: giantess jessica Signed [Report This]
Date: February 10 2019 7:43 PM Title: Stabilisation | All Goddesses

good job!

Author's Response:

Thanks! Your support means alot!



Author's Response:

Thanks! Your support means alot!

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