Date: April 06 2019 10:16 PM Title: Sensitive | Cassi, Sarah
I like the idea of Sarah wanting to play mortal for a bit and having a daughter and a husband. But, actions have consequences. So, i think it would be cool if something happens to the universe because of this and Sarah and Hannah have to fix it due to being the Goddesses out of time. Maybe they can each gain a new aspect upon successfully keeping the universe from imploding or exploding or something bad...ing.
Don't know how much ahead of Chapter 14 has been written, but what's the plan for Victoria? Maybe She tries to fight, fails since divine power is finite, and its explained to her that she was intended to be the Goddess of Balance or something. And she and Hannah explore their new demi-goddess status together.
Author's Response:
Hey there, Panzerhunter, thank you for your review! We really do appreciate it! Now, about the consequences you mentioned; you'll be happy to know that as soon as JFT showed me the draft of 'Hannah's chapter', I also thought that this ought to be followed up by some consequences! I've already put them into chapter 15 (which should hopefully go out soon-ish), but I'm afraid they won't be quite as all-encompassing as something bad happening to the entire universe, but I still hope that they're bad enough that Sarah (and Hannah) are forced to deal with it in a manner that leads to some character growth.
And there is also (at least) one chapter written that looks back at what Victoria was doing before and after the tournament, which would/should end with a drastic choice laid out at the end. However, the outcome of that decision has yet to be determined by JFT, so we'll have to see what happens to her and/or if she'll get to bond with Hannah.