[Report This]Date: March 12 2019 9:27 PM Title: Sasha | Sarah/Alyssa
Would love the Irony of Ella being the one who show Sarah how wrong she has been with the two times she has given into the evil goddesses.
Ella with her artist are enjoying new eden as are all the 'goddesses' she runs into Alyassa sniffs and notes three dead planets where there was once life. A notices and chuckles evily and dismissively of E, oh Sarah will give you planets with billions all you have to do is ask.
Ella looks with contempt at Sarah (being nature) and begins to cry over the lost tinies, Theia, Arannia and even Cessi consol the goddess of the Wild, while Sarah already having had the discussion with T, Ar and Ce stating she is the Matricarch she does what she damn well pleases (though already shifting slightly if only for logical reasons, you can give Alyassa 23 billion every day, or every decade or let Fionna rape a new world) is shamed by Ella and begins to rethink, then Fionna brings her tributes she took from Theia's world and begins killing them, Ella strikes her and secures a bag smells it and give it back to it's "owner" Theia while glaring at Sarah.
Sarah with Rich, and others has began to regert her previous actions, she want to go along to get along, but increasingly realizes that isn't going to work. The poor treatment of tributes and worlds isnt' going to work either. like Battlemaster-3D says there are greater things at work and the old model and cruetly will end them she senses. So, Sarah begins to assert herself to Fionna and Alyassa if not protecting tributes yet, at least not wasting the resources and since it takes so little effort she begins to make life a bit more comfortable for them as her guilt and remorse slowly grow.
Author's Response:
Hello again, we really appreciate your reviews, and again, both JustForTribute and I actively want to write towards a gentler universe, however we're trying to keep this a slow process. (I admit, that's mostly my fault, I want to make that transition from centuries of cruelty to kindness feel vaguely natural. [Whether I'm successful is up for debate.])
The same also goes for Ella's broken mind. After years of torture she isn't just yet in a place where she'd care enough for humans to do what you suggested. But I'll see about speeding up her recovery through her time with her artist friend Simon. Though please be aware that this might take a while too. JustForTribute and I are kinda drafting several ideas at once, that all line up and build on one another, so it might take a couple of chapters before we can address this. But yes, I promise that things are definitely changing.
[Report This]Date: March 12 2019 8:40 PM Title: Sasha | Sarah/Alyssa
Kind of disappointed in Sarah's caulousness, for a second she seemed to be understanding the pain she had inflected on those who under different circumstances of bee like her in power. Give 23 billion for Alyassa to play with as 'goddess of life' is just DUMB! Life is her focus to just go blah take all the life you want is contray to her purpose, yes balance, yes circle of life, but she just let people die cause 'her sister' on a whim thinks they go well with her nail polish.
Would love for Arannia, Thiea and using logic bringing Cessi on board to confront her on this. Basically you have twice just let your purpose be over whelmed by those who couldn't care less about you, and would take your power in a heart beat if they could. If Sasha doesn't want to 'rule' and be life maybe Cessi or Thiea would be better at least they can count after what Fonnia did to a devolping world and what Alyassa did to three heavily populated worlds, it wont matter how many new worlds are created it will never be enough for those two and as long it takes to develop a world you "matricarh' have on a whim of your 'sister' whose purpose is diameterically opposed to yours set back efforts by centeries if they can ever be set right as you seem more then willing to just allow worlds to be destoryed for the least of reasons.
Would also like a larger plot to be uncovered by Theia, that Charlotte deliberately left, she couldn't destory the universe without killing herself, and all her cruelity and evil caused a Karmic backlash that would of ended her (even with all her power a single virus can take the mighty of us down) so she has her maids set up as scapegoats and will take the fall for her acts if they don't learn and set things right. of course there is resistatance to Theia and later Arannia, but Cessi begins to see it and Ella begins to feel it ect.
That their has to be blance, maybe Rich is visted by either Theia or Arannia and finds not all goddess are Bs like Alyassa and Sarah. Sarah over time slowly remembers her humanity and finds a way for one of the other goddess to 'free' him, she 'captures' him threatens him, emotionally tortures him a bit, but he becomes her north star as she slowly works to re-blancing things.
Good chapter, thank you.
Author's Response:
Hello there, thank you for your in-depth review - this gives us a good amount of points to work with. First off, I want to reassure you that we're actively working towards giving the gentle Goddesses a more prominent role, and yes, we also believe that "it'll never be enough" for Alyssa and Fiona - a point we plan on addressing in the future.
Though as for Sarah, please understand that she has been living for eons in an environment where life was regarded as disposable. This is a belief that can't be shaken easily. So while yes, at the moment she is the Goddess of Life, in her eyes that just means that she can create life from nothing - lives that she still sees as entirely disposable. In her eyes this is just an ability that allows her to summon the equivalent of snacks. But I'm sure that over the course of future chapters, her sisters might help her understand their value better.
And while I don't want to give away too much, we do have an overarching plot planned, that also touches on the event's of Ascension in the last story.
As for Rich, I'm currently not sure if he'd be interesting enough to be reintroduced, as we've already got a few other candidates lined up for Sarah. But I'll see if we can find a good reason for him to come back.