Reviews For The Big Mistake
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Reviewer: DrManhattan Signed [Report This]
Date: June 14 2009 5:36 AM Title: Last Hope

A nice resolution to this story.

Ashley asking if anyone had an interesting day yesterday was pretty funny. That seemed to fit her character quite well (based on the admittedly brief encounter we were privillaged). So carefree, so ignorant.

That was a tense concluding scene, the one with Brittany almost killing Bobby. It was going to be a difficult task making Bobby relevant in the resolution, but you pulled it off quite nicely. Kim has really good timing, by the way.

As I said before, I never really considered Brittany to be the evil sort, so I'm glad to see her come around in the end. She really did seem like a good person at heart; she was just frustrated with the ways of the world, and ended up corrupted by the amazing power granted her by the shrinking powder. I think we can all relate.

I also laughed pretty hard when Brittany told Bobby he was only human. After all he went through (and all she put him through), it was brilliant to have her make light of the "Big Mistake".

Nice final line, by the way.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 12 2009 8:34 PM Title: Last Hope

Excellent conclusion! Who knows? Maybe this Bobby and Brittany will turn out to be counterparts of the couple over at "Victim of Love?"

Just a thought. ;-)

Author's Response: lol believe it or not, theyre 2 different characters

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