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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: November 08 2007 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 4: This sucks

Heh! Ashley must have kept the purse open just enough to give him air. But, all the jostling from class to class widened it even further.

Reviewer: Asukafan2001 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 06 2007 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 4: This sucks

another good chapter, iliked the vaccuum. it was suspenseful and the injury made him seem more human, it created  abit of sympathy for him where before he was just kind of portrayed as a pig.

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