[Report This]Date: June 21 2023 12:52 PM Title: The Accident
Nice, I like to see the mother getting bigger and sexier while her son shrink, giant moms are awesome.
[Report This]Date: January 20 2023 9:33 AM Title: The Accident
I know it's been a while, but if you're still here, would you consider continue this? Loved the premise! The characters are so well written, and the relationship between bro and sis are just adorable!
Hope to see more of this in the future 🙏
Date: October 10 2020 8:33 AM Title: The Accident
My favorite story is Parllels 2 by BBL, and I absolutely loved your references and inspiration from that story. When I saw the name Corina my heart skipped a beat! Hopefully we'll see more of her soon!
great story, and I look forward to more chapters!
Author's Response:
I always favoried Parallels one, personally, and I am glad that you got the easter egg! As for if we'll see more of Corina, I haven't decided yet if she's going to be a reoccuring character for this arc, or if I'm going to just make her a one-off. We'll see. ^_^
Date: May 19 2019 8:02 PM Title: The Accident
Well, either way, I am really looking forward to reading more and hopefully Nicola makes a reappearance as his attorney as he gets down to some really small sizes ;)
Author's Response:
Afraid not, it was just a small cameo, but there will be references to other author's works such as Minuss, and BBL Zimmer, as I said this is an omage to the authors that have inspired me over the years.
Date: May 19 2019 2:18 PM Title: The Accident
I al so excited you decided to continue this slow shrink story as it is one of the best on this site! Your storytelling and descriptions are wonderful, and I cannot wait to see how his relationship with Gwen changes as he shrinks to a tiny size. I am hopeful he gets well below 1 inch and there is a footplay focus. I am especially excited to see your inspiration from SG and the inclusion of Nicola!! She is an AMAZING character (although she is Irish, not Scottish in SG), and including her will help a lot of people sustain themselves before OHH's Nicola growth story begins. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
Actually her profile states she's from scottland, but moved to Ireland, but I might've read it wrong. Either case I wanted to make sure that I payed tribute to him with this chapter, and I figured what better way than making her the representative of the victimes of the accident? I'm glad you like the story and as soon as I figure out the next arc I'll post the nex chapter.
Date: April 28 2019 5:10 AM Title: The Accident
Am I missing something, or is there a reason VitaCorp believes they could sell the main character on the idea an antibiotic could cure a virus? Antibiotics are designed for bacteria; the way a virus functions and replicates is so different that antibiotics are next to useless and could do more harm than good. You need an antiviral drug for viruses.
I've been playing Pheonix Wright and my brain is currently set to nitpicky 'Objection' mode to spot the falsehood in the nefarious plot of Vitacorp to shrink the main character teeny-tiny enough his younger sister's nipple is like a mountain to him.
Author's Response: They were banking on a mixture of him not being in the right state of mind and possibly being irrational enough to either do it on his own, or hoping that peer pressure from his family would cause him to cave. It’s also safe to assume that they wouldn’t actually know that he was conducting his own research.
Date: March 25 2019 1:14 PM Title: The Accident
I really hope this story continues...it is one of the best on here!
Author's Response:
It will, it was just on Hiatus.
Date: December 05 2018 8:20 PM Title: The Accident
I always love more realistic takes on the shrinking fantasy, developing the kinds of relationships and reactions that you'd expect, while still playing within the fantasy that we all love so very much about shrinking! So thank you for starting and continuing this story. I personally can't wait until he gets down below 1' (ideally 1"), but its your story and you'll get there (or maybe you won't, I don't know!) eventually. I'll keep reading and waiting for new installments in the meantime.
Thank you! :)
Author's Response: First off you’re welcome, and THANK YOU! For the kind revie, yes he will be below and inch tall before the story is done.
Date: November 02 2018 12:12 AM Title: The Accident
Great story so far. Very well written. Please continue writing!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the kind reviw!
Date: October 31 2018 3:32 PM Title: The Accident
Great chapter. Love the teasing/foreshadowing of the sister saying shes gonna run with him in her shoe, or put him between her cheeks
Author's Response:
Glad you're enjoying the story, and thank you for the review!
[Report This]Date: October 26 2018 4:20 AM Title: The Accident
Nice Story ! :) Love Slow shrink ... Continue :3
Author's Response:
Thank you, and I hope to have the new chapter up soon.
[Report This]Date: October 24 2018 4:53 PM Title: The Accident
great story well written unaware is my favorite
Author's Response: It’s not going to be a completely unaware setting, just little spots here and there.
Date: October 22 2018 7:34 PM Title: The Accident
love where this is going, great writing and build up, cant wait for more!
Author's Response: I’m glad you’re enjoying the story! Thank you for the review!
Date: October 18 2018 3:29 PM Title: The Accident
Glad to see youre back. Your stuff is legendary. Cant wait to see more.
Author's Response:
Haha, I wouldn't call it "legendary" there are far better authors more deserving of that title, but thank you for the kind review, and hopefully I shall finish this one.
Date: October 18 2018 11:40 AM Title: The Accident
Oooh, greatly looking forward to watching this play out.
In the first chapter you show that you have a deft mastery of words and are quite good at establishing characters.
Rock on!
Author's Response:
I'm glad to read that you're enjoying the first chapter and thank you for the kind review.
[Report This]Date: October 18 2018 3:33 AM Title: The Accident
Great start. I see u got the nano tag, is there plans to get him that height?
Author's Response:
Eventually he will get down to around....*shot with tranquilizer dart* We're sorry, but the author is not authorized to disclose that information until the chapter relating to the tagged size has been released, if at all. We thank you for reading the story and hope you continue to support it.
Date: October 17 2018 8:55 PM Title: The Accident
Wow, just the kind of story I was looking for.. and on my bday too
havn't seen a good slow shrink in a while and this looks very promising.. looking forward to the updates. thanks!
Author's Response:
Well first off happy birthday, second off thank you for the kind review.
Lastly I hope that it turns out as good as I would like it too, and I'm glad to read you're enjoying it thus far.
Date: October 17 2018 6:28 PM Title: The Accident
Yes, very interested in seeing this progress. A slow-shrink novel is always great! Would love some footplay when he gets small enough...
Author's Response:
Thank you for the kind review, and don't worry there will be plenty of foot play from both the mom and sister to satisfy even the most seasoned foot fetishist.
Date: October 17 2018 6:26 PM Title: The Accident
oh crap, just seeing a story that will be in the vein of minuss, with butt and scat tags.....MERCY. please continue!
Author's Response:
Haha I didn't say I could do it as well as Minuss would, but I'll do my best to attempt to emulate his incredible descriptive prowess as best I can, and thank you for the kind review.