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Reviewer: Barachiel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 03 2020 8:38 PM Title: Desperate Heroism

Very nice! I’m excited to see what happens next. I was happy to see that even Bushwack was willing to interject and defend our protagonist, though it’s a shame no one stood up to Lell before she ‘stood‘ on our hero. Still holding out for more chapters or interactions where our hero is at the mercy of our pixie friend. Maybe now he’s earned a place as a pet, or maybe even as her share of the loot once they divine their reward? Wishful thinking, I know. I just think Bushwack is the perfect balance of meanness without being completely cruel like Lell. And BOY do I hope the hero gets a chance to get revenge on Lell. If nothing else, I reallllllly want him to get some sort of revenge on her and Kiri before ending up as Sondra or Bushwack.

Sorry for rambling!

Author's Response:

This has all been leading to a big change in the relationships between characters that'll come out in the next installment.  There won't be a lot of focus on Bushwack, but Lell will at least get some of what's coming to her.

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