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Reviewer: meereten01 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 28 2018 1:37 PM Title: Demonic Possession

Kirinhalut already abandons her tiny man?  Fulda at least stays with them usually, until death parts them. But hopefully, he will experience some good adventures.

I also like how big and detailed you described Kirinhalut in this chapter, thank you for that.

Also, thanks for writing!



Author's Response:

Fulda's mean, but Kirinhalut is the embodiment of pure evil.  Not exactly the perfect picture of loyalty.  But fortunately for the protagonist, things don't always go her way.

 

Thanks!  I noticed that recently I was starting to lean more toward "well, she's big," and wanted to rectify that with a much longer description of how absolutely gigantic she is for the POV character, and I'm glad it worked.

 

It's a pleasure to write, thanks for reviewing!

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