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Reviewer: MadHatter Signed [Report This]
Date: September 03 2018 4:04 PM Title: Hollow Victory

I haven't commented too much on all of your stories so far cause i'm a lazy ass (not afraid to admit that lol) but you have quickly become one of my top authors on the site lol.

Looking forward to the conclusion of the Prom incident story most of all right now but enjoying the side tales and such and these seperate ones just as much



Author's Response:

I always appreciate reads, even silent ones :) And I'm always working on new stuff now, and if you want to write more reviews they're a great way to make an author feel appreciated!

Reviewer: meereten01 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 28 2018 1:37 PM Title: Demonic Possession

Kirinhalut already abandons her tiny man?  Fulda at least stays with them usually, until death parts them. But hopefully, he will experience some good adventures.

I also like how big and detailed you described Kirinhalut in this chapter, thank you for that.

Also, thanks for writing!



Author's Response:

Fulda's mean, but Kirinhalut is the embodiment of pure evil.  Not exactly the perfect picture of loyalty.  But fortunately for the protagonist, things don't always go her way.

 

Thanks!  I noticed that recently I was starting to lean more toward "well, she's big," and wanted to rectify that with a much longer description of how absolutely gigantic she is for the POV character, and I'm glad it worked.

 

It's a pleasure to write, thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Jessica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 28 2018 1:31 AM Title: Hollow Victory

Definitely enjoyed what's there so far, seems like a really interesting premise! Thank you for writing it and I look forward to reading more.



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I'm glad this is starting to get some traction.  I'll add to this weekly, or more often if I have extra time, so check back regularly and please keep reviewing.

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