Reviewer: Pixis Signed [Report This]
Date: August 16 2018 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 4

"A constant state of magma belching unrest." I love that image. You're a talented writer and you set a scene quite well. Interesting that the dragon is forcing the human soldiers into his service. I didn't expect that tactic. The next chapter is bound to be fun.

Author's Response:

These new chapters will definitely feel a little different from the intro, but hopefully just as enjoyable