Reviews For The wrong spell
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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: June 18 2018 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 6

You need to separate the narrative text from the character dialogue. You also need to watch the run-on sentences.

Reviewer: George1000 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 11 2018 9:05 AM Title: Chapter 1

Beautiful Story. Next Chapter. Quikly, harry up :) I hope this story have a lot of more chapters 

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: June 10 2018 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 4

Not bad. This is almost like an R-rated version of Robo's "OOOOPS!"

{See under "Old Archive."}

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 10 2018 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 4

Wow, this story is amazing! I never thought of panties this way and it really expanded my imagination.

I would love to be a pair of sexy panties for a beatiful lady and being able to feel her body, smell her scent, and taste her juices must be fantastic.

Personally, I prefer him going back to his wife. His wife was super sexy and I loved how creative she was with her spells. I can't wait to see her use the panties and possible make new adjustments. She can tighten them, multiply his senses, maybe her pussy will start sucking on his face.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback, itís great to hear from readers telling me they are enjoying my stories considering Iím only new to writing, Iíve been a long time reader and thought Iíd turn the page and start to write down my ideas to see if readers thought. I hope you continue to enjoy my story.

Reviewer: zbh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 09 2018 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 1

It’s up to you the author! However I was just thinking if his wife eventually gets him back, there’s always room for more magical things and witchcraft.

Reviewer: zbh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 09 2018 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 1

Interesting, wonder if his wife will get him back at some point. Seems like this story could go quite a few ways!



Author's Response: Thank you so much for the feedback, Iím glad your enjoying it so far, but would you like his wife to get him back or would you rather that she has lost him to another woman forever ?

Reviewer: zbh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 08 2018 10:09 AM Title: Chapter 1

Great start! Interested to see where this goes

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