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Reviewer: Braeburn Signed [Report This]
Date: July 28 2019 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Shelby's First Session

Quite a fan of your work! We chatted at length on a Discord server, but I'm sad to see you deleted your account! Good to see you're still writing, though! 

Reviewer: Stepbonk Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 25 2018 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Shelby's First Session

I think the whole premise is very interesting, exciting and unique, and I can definitely imagine people who would be into this stuff if it were possible. If it were up to me, the only thing I'd want to change is getting to keep my clothes while I shrink and she's having her way with me under her sexy sandals and feet. Other than dropping my pants for a midget footjob and little things like that, I just wouldn't be able to enjoy the experience if I were naked and shoeless, because I'd feel like my exposed body defiles her natural beauty.

 

But whether her victims are naked or clothed, I think Sara would be the perfect kind of dominatrix to shrink a couple of big, tough, wealthy macho guys who challenge each other to a dare and have no idea what they're getting into, without a safe word. I picture them having their way with her feet and sucking her toes while she shrinks them little by little, but as she starts to gain the advantage on them, they start to freak out and demand to cancel, but it's too late and she simply jerks them off with her feet as they dwindle, just to "prove" they really like it deep inside even if they don't!

 

Then she'd head out in flip flops to get an expensive artsy pedicure while continuing to shrink her little victims bit by bit under her lovely feet and toes, show her slaves off to the other ladies, torture and humiliate the crap out of them. By the end, she'd have a female slave shrink down with the men in her palm just to make them even smaller than the usual limit, bugs to a bug lost on Sara's sole, making them watch this slave grow back to giga size while she worships Sara's feet. From the very beginning, once Sara has the men small enough to control with or without the remote, she would be telling them everything she's going to do with them throughout the day, just so they can struggle and fail to prevent it!

 

Definitely I think Sara needs to have a male slave do a session without safe words, regardless of how you prefer it to play out!



Author's Response: Interesting premise; I think i’ll Try something along those lines after I get Shelby through her weekend. Regarding the first part about being clothed versus naked, that’s part of the inherent humiliation. The shrunken slave is denied their dignity from the get-go

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: July 21 2018 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Shelby's First Session

I don't know what "fet-life" is. I think I've heard it mentioned before somewhere but I've never gone onto that website. I was lucky enough to be introduced to this person (Goddess) on Deviantart, and – because I enjoy Her company – I make Her a lot of renders. I wouldn't necessarily refer to it as "D/S" - it's merely somebody who I enjoy talking to and we never really role play because...well...I don't know. I know She likes to role play but I've never had the urge to do so myself. I like that we’re good friends, that the friendship does not revolve solely around sexual things, and that I have enough charisma in order not to need to pay somebody to pay attention me. *cough* Katie. *cough*

I value your writing, which is perhaps why I became emotionally invested in it to an extent. The story has grown on me and definitely admire it for being a well written piece of literature. I think you're right to say that this sort of thing would go on. However, I'm of the impression that there'd be lots of legislation in place if shrinking was possible in order to attempt to prevent abuses of the technology.

If even the common person (such as a Sara) can have access to the technology, then what's stopping a jealous ex-partner, for example, from doing all kinds of crazy things with such a collar. Maybe you'd need a license to use it and Sara happens to be one of the lucky few (or those who can afford it)? If the technology is freely available then, sure, any old revenge plot could work, and it’d be fun to see Andrea break Sara (or at least try to?).

The thing with most authoritarians though, is that they are usually secretly weak and it’s all projection (videos of Nazis crying always amuse me). For example, you can watch a video of Donald Trump where he clings desperately to the secret service personnel when a protestor once managed to get on the stage at a political rally instead of acting like a “tough cookie” (sorry for the politics) and he also avoided serving in the Vietnam War because he lied and claimed he was too unfit to serve (and yet he insulted John McCain for being captured in Vietnam). It would certainly be exciting to see the tables turned but maybe you’d have Sara have the last laugh? Making it non-cannon would make more sense I’d imagine.

Source:

https://youtu.be/5Xu5lz4fS-Y

Maybe a more believable plot is another “dominant” person is jealous of Sara for some reason. Perhaps there is an intense rivalry, maybe something like “you stole my slave”. But perhaps Andrea is one of those people: you know, those people in out community that claim to worship giantesses and yet are happy to insult them when they don’t get exactly what they want? Andrea doesn’t automatically strike me as the revenge type but maybe she is two-faced after all, and she has a sort of job which could make her the pretentious type.

Yes, there is definitely "extreme" content out there. The voice actors for a main character in one of the shows that I love was found to be in a BDSM cult that had resulted in the death(s) of people in Japan. Upon discovering this, they re-wrote the entire plot going forward and the show was denied an arguably better plot (which ironically did involve cults) as wanted to (presumably) distance themselves from this individual.



Author's Response: Oh I’m certain you’re correct about legislation for devices and tech that could change peoples size. However since my fiction-writing is my source of escape from reality, I won’t concern this verse with such serious ethical issues, and let the Mistress own all those willing to subject themselves. I think Loki said it best in Avengers when he tells the crowd in Germany that they crave subjugation :) Regarding a role-reversal, I like the idea about another mistress being upset or territorial about losing a client. I’ll keep that in the queue for story dev!

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: June 18 2018 8:06 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Shelby's First Session

I believe I have sent you an e-mail (to the one listed on your profile here). I should send a second one now that I can give you the link that you wanted. Probably shoiuld have thought that through better.



Author's Response: Got them, thanks!

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: June 16 2018 10:36 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Shelby's First Session

I think I may have been subconsciously ridiculing Katie because of the moronic decision that she made – despite the fact she is a fictional character. I just think that she is stupid for paying Sara. Yes, it’s fictional, and I would that if such a scenario was happening in the real world I’d hope somebody would give the likes of Sara a stern talking to for taking advantage of such a vulnerable person. Of course, me scorning somebody in Katie’s situation doesn’t help the situation at all and deep down it saddens me that Katie feels this way about herself.

I haven't been doing much reading on the website at all this year. As a result, my ranking in the ‘top ten most prolific reviewers’ has slipped. I do hope to read more though and catch up on some stories I may have missed. I have not clicked on any of your other stories I am sorry to inform. Ten to fifteen pages in a day is very commendable, especially given that your writing is at a higher level than many on this website.

As you have provided it on your profile page, I'll likely e-mail you with some further thoughts or ideas. Additionally, should you wish to join, I can send you a link through e-mail to the giantess story authors' Discord server which I made (many well-known authors are already on it).



Author's Response: Yes, I’d be interested. Thanks again for the reviews, thoughts, and interactions.

Reviewer: SoleWriter Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 12 2018 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Shelby's First Session

Been a while since I’ve read something I really enjoyed. Thanks for your contribution and I look forward to future chapters!

Reviewer: scrymgeour Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 26 2018 8:00 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Shelby's First Session

Bravo



Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: atherfeet Signed [Report This]
Date: May 19 2018 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Shelby's First Session

Wow! I’m genuinely impressed by the quality of this story :) Can’t wait to see more.

And maybe... someone taking off the collar... ;)

Author's Response: Hmmm...I might need to alter Andrea’s experience in chapter 2. Good idea!

Reviewer: Psn01 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 15 2018 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Shelby's First Session

great updates so far.after reading puf1 and puf2 i personally think you should write more about phoebe and her mother.also to introduce her grandma too.you are very very very talented and i cant wait to read more and the family foot slave when you upload it.



Author's Response: Thanks! I suspect I’ll revisit the PUF universe again soon.

Reviewer: Cameron99 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 15 2018 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Shelby's First Session

Wow absolutely excellent writing here! The descriptions, the dialogue, the glow, everything is just top notch.

 

Question, would you be open to accepting commissions set in this universe/series? Because if so idI be extremely interested to talk to you about one



Author's Response: I’d be open to it; email me at charlesfinley4273@gmail.com

Reviewer: Latinofireman Signed [Report This]
Date: May 13 2018 7:49 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Shelby's First Session

This is a name I have my seen in a while.  Glad to see you are back and happy to see you will be reloading your previous stories!  

Really like the concept and look forward to the upcoming chapters.  An idea for an upcoming chapter could be she gets a first time client who decides they don't want a safe word.  They either vastly underestimate how much the pressure/smell/tastes/heat/etc can get or they just wanted a feeling of completr helplessness.  It then turns out they do not like it at all, but now  must suffer through the (multi-hour?) session.  Sara can either leave the mic on to hear their suffering or has it off and is oblivious to their plight.  Anyways, just an idea!  Cant wait to see where you take this story.



Author's Response: Love this idea!!!!

Reviewer: Psn01 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 11 2018 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Shelby's First Session

hey please answer...i found out that you have amazing stories but they are not here.why?and i would really love to see the story my family's footslave(i cant find it anywhere it is your old story so i thought you post it)and any other stories about giantess mother that are old and write the new ones.please sorry for bad english.



Author's Response:

Hello,

At this time, my copies of Family Foot Slave are on an HDD that is currently packed up, but I hope to get to within a few months.  I'm in the prcess of reposting Phoebe Underfoot and its sequel.  Hope you enjoyed this, and PUF/PUF2 when I get them reposted.

Dil

Reviewer: Tinyman345 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 11 2018 12:16 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Shelby's First Session

This story is outstanding much like your others!

Random question but any chance of you reposting your older stories? Sorry if I'm overstepping by asking but they were incredible!

Author's Response:

I found PUF & PUF2 on pastebin, and am in the process of removing the HTML code that is still there.  Additionally, I'm going to expand upon some of the later chapters of the first PUF.  Other stories of mine are sitting on an old hard drive that I hope to resurrect in the future, but my focus is on restoring the PUF series along with this new story.

 

 

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed [Report This]
Date: May 11 2018 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Shelby's First Session

"exclaimed Shelby as the insole lessened" :D

 

Seriously now, before saying anything about the story it's great to have you back, when you deleted your old stories I didn't think we'd hear from you ever again



Author's Response:

Thanks, there was a "GAASP" missing there.  

 

Yeh, I have no easy way to explain what happened, but I think I tried to deny that this is part of who I am, and well, yeh, I'm tired of doing that.  So, here we go again.  And other than my Phoebe Under Foot series, I feel that a lot of my stuff was junk compared to that series.  I feel I set a very high bar of what my mind can create.  It's a scary place :)

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 10 2018 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Shelby's First Session

A very cool concept, I'd love to see more.



Author's Response:

Any ideas or suggestions as to what you'd like to see?

Reviewer: reeroo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 10 2018 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Shelby's First Session

Fantastic story! I'm really excited to see such a nice story that combines d/s and GTS so well! Also, could you please add some about treating sub like object(toe ring, insole) or sharing sub with other dom? Thanks!



Author's Response: I think we can make that happen

Reviewer: voredom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 10 2018 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Shelby's First Session

I absolutely love scenarios like this one, with someone paying to be shrunk down and dominated, and you've absolutely aced it so far. Every single part of this was amazing. As far as things to be seen in future chapters, I'm a huge fan of insertion, especially anal insertion, so seeing some of that would be absolutely perfect.



Author's Response: Ill look to work it, and Shelby or some other sub, in :)

Reviewer: kynur Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 10 2018 2:05 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Shelby's First Session

Amazing story , keep it up. Would like to see some more in shoe / stocking / sock. Happy to see a very good written story again that matches my taste!



Author's Response: Oh yes, this is definitely in the future!

Reviewer: Afroking Signed [Report This]
Date: May 10 2018 11:12 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Shelby's First Session

wait a sec... am i reading a new story from thee dilbertaco! I gotta strap in my seat belt for this story.



Author's Response: Indeed! Enjoy!

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