[Report This]Date: July 06 2018 3:13 PM Title: Tennis Shoe
Good finish.
Neither Alex or the reader ever got to find out what the light was that shrunk him, but I guess it's not that important in the context of the story since he never returned to normal anyway.
[Report This]Date: July 01 2018 2:16 PM Title: Tennis Shoe
Whether he stays small or gets back to normal, I hope he gets his happy ending!
Date: July 01 2018 1:08 PM Title: Tennis Shoe
My votes for a nice gentle ending!!!
[Report This]Date: May 01 2018 2:07 PM Title: Tennis Shoe
I'm loving it so far, and I'm excited to see where it'll go from here.
Do you plan on keeping it unaware? I absolutely adore unaware stories, but I know they're not everyone's cup of tea.
Author's Response:
Yeah, I went into this with idea that it'd be an unaware story so expect it to be that way for most if not all of it.
Date: April 17 2018 8:44 AM Title: Tennis Shoe
This is a great story, and I like where it's going, combined with your detail and writing! Keep up the good work!
Date: March 30 2018 4:04 AM Title: Tennis Shoe
Other than going from a first person narrative and changing to a second person narrative about half way through the story it's a nice first chapter. Looking forward to reading more.
Author's Response:
Oops. I did do that didn't I? I will watch out for that in future chapters. Thanks.