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Reviewer: Oblivious Signed [Report This]
Date: April 17 2018 8:44 AM Title: Tennis Shoe

This is a great story, and I like where it's going, combined with your detail and writing! Keep up the good work!

Reviewer: Kane001 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 30 2018 4:04 AM Title: Tennis Shoe

Other than going from a first person narrative and changing to a second person narrative about half way through the story it's a nice first chapter. Looking forward to reading more.



Author's Response:

Oops.  I did do that didn't I?  I will watch out for that in future chapters.  Thanks.  

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