Date: May 01 2018 2:07 PM Title: Tennis Shoe
I'm loving it so far, and I'm excited to see where it'll go from here.
Do you plan on keeping it unaware? I absolutely adore unaware stories, but I know they're not everyone's cup of tea.
Yeah, I went into this with idea that it'd be an unaware story so expect it to be that way for most if not all of it.
Date: March 30 2018 4:04 AM Title: Tennis Shoe
Other than going from a first person narrative and changing to a second person narrative about half way through the story it's a nice first chapter. Looking forward to reading more.
Oops. I did do that didn't I? I will watch out for that in future chapters. Thanks.