[Report This]Date: July 06 2018 3:13 PM Title: Tennis Shoe
Good finish.
Neither Alex or the reader ever got to find out what the light was that shrunk him, but I guess it's not that important in the context of the story since he never returned to normal anyway.
[Report This]Date: July 01 2018 2:16 PM Title: Tennis Shoe
Whether he stays small or gets back to normal, I hope he gets his happy ending!
Date: July 01 2018 1:08 PM Title: Tennis Shoe
My votes for a nice gentle ending!!!
Date: June 11 2018 9:47 AM Title: Cinnamon Roll
Nice chapter. I hope he avoids being crushed, but does get swallowed, and ends up having to go out the other way, and lives through it all. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Date: May 08 2018 8:26 AM Title: Pancakes
Nice chapter. Hope the guy survives being swallowed, but has to come out the other end.
[Report This]Date: May 01 2018 2:07 PM Title: Tennis Shoe
I'm loving it so far, and I'm excited to see where it'll go from here.
Do you plan on keeping it unaware? I absolutely adore unaware stories, but I know they're not everyone's cup of tea.
Author's Response:
Yeah, I went into this with idea that it'd be an unaware story so expect it to be that way for most if not all of it.
Date: April 17 2018 8:44 AM Title: Tennis Shoe
This is a great story, and I like where it's going, combined with your detail and writing! Keep up the good work!
Date: March 30 2018 4:04 AM Title: Tennis Shoe
Other than going from a first person narrative and changing to a second person narrative about half way through the story it's a nice first chapter. Looking forward to reading more.
Author's Response:
Oops. I did do that didn't I? I will watch out for that in future chapters. Thanks.