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Reviewer: KentaRyu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 16 2018 11:15 PM Title: Ishtar

Very nice Ishtar story especially liked the Mashu part.

Reviewer: No21 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 03 2018 1:05 PM Title: Chapter 2

This is one the best EVA giantess fanfic, especially on Asuka and Rei. I like the stories about Rei more so I hope that the additional content for this idea (especially Premonition and Impact) would be completed.

On one hand, I also like the Asuka impact but I think that it is good to try that same story idea with Rei since Giant Naked Rei is great. Shinji will also love Giant Naked Rei more since well at least she is not that abusive to Asuka even though in this chapter she could be ruthless in getting what she wants.

anyway, good luck and thanks for this chapter! Rated 9 because still waiting for update for the other scenarios mentiond in this chapter.

Reviewer: KentaRyu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 17 2018 8:35 PM Title: SUTEKI SUTEKI

Oh, that's very kind of you! For me, I usually go for F/f shrinking scenarios. As for the characters, maybe something with Shuten playing with a shrinking Raiko, or Ereshkigal dealing with a shrunken Ishtar or the other way around. Though, to be honest, I would love to read about Jack with a shrinking well-endowed servant, taking her as her mother and not wanting to get apart from her, but I'm sure if you would be comfortable with that.

Reviewer: KentaRyu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 17 2018 9:50 AM Title: SUTEKI SUTEKI

Nice chapter! Though I'm not that much of a fan of Medb so my favorite part was the sweaty neet.



Author's Response:

I'm kind of in the mood for it, so you can let me know if there's any other Fate size fiction which you want me to write! Even though this involved shrink, I primarily write growth stories, but feel free to suggest anything.

Thanks for the review! 

Reviewer: BoozedUp Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 15 2018 5:38 AM Title: Chie, Yukiko, and the Hot-Spring

3rd and 6th are my favourites, since theyre up my alley. Good stuff overall.

I suggest you release these separately as oneshots though, they're not getting the recognition they deserve.



Author's Response:

I might try releasing them separately in the future. For now, I'm just going to describe the chapters on the front. Thanks for letting me know!

Reviewer: meereten01 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 21 2018 4:32 AM Title: To Sister

This almost gives a "Small Sisters" sort of vibe. Other than saying that I wish it was a bit longer, I don't have any feedback to give on the story.

Oh and of course, I also think its very well written.

Thank you and until next time!

Reviewer: Lil Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 21 2018 12:52 AM Title: Chie, Yukiko, and the Hot-Spring

Love all yours stories *_* ! Continue ! 

Can you do a story with brother and sister ? Who the brother slow shrink ? :3 & the little sister take advantage day by day ? :3


Reviewer: lancealot501 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 20 2018 12:55 PM Title: Chie, Yukiko, and the Hot-Spring

I think these short stories are actually really good. I enjoyed the third one immensely. If you are taking suggestions then how about a short story where an absurdly tall girl is either grown/shrunk with her short friends at a bar. After their fun they are shrunk/grown back to their original size. The only problem is that the machine messes up and leaves the short girls a good bit taller than they originally were. The absurdly tall girl comes out of the bathroom to find that she is now barely even 5 feet tall in heels.

Reviewer: gtsfan91 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 22 2018 4:32 AM Title: Chie, Yukiko, and the Hot-Spring

Really great length an well written. Can't wait for the next.

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