[Report This]Date: March 17 2018 8:04 PM Title: The dangers of hypnosis
Duck super smal criticism, but you should change it when His mother is hypnotized to when you hear the word blue, not when I say the word blue. Otherwise is doesn’t make sense when the blue cheese salesman says it, because only the Grand Debbie can say it for it to take effect currently
Author's Response:
Fixed, thanks for spotting that :)
[Report This]Date: March 17 2018 7:14 PM Title: The dangers of hypnosis
So glad to see you back duck;)! Love your work!
Date: March 17 2018 2:35 AM Title: The dangers of hypnosis
Loved it. The Grand Debbie idea was great. Loved the idea of the word blue making her react. Terrific idea and story. Very much enjoyed.
Author's Response:
Thanks. I'm hoping I can write plenty of isolated shorter stories like this and explore a variety of ideas. I try writing longer stories and end up losing interest or starting on other ideas. Stick around and I hope you'll enjoy future installments.
Date: March 16 2018 6:50 PM Title: The dangers of hypnosis
Hello! I have posted a couple of stories in the past, one finished and one annoyingly unfinished, and I thought that perhaps a collection of shorter stories might be easier to write rather than rely on myself being able to pump out chapter after chapter of a longer story. Mostly inspired during a painstaking marathon of Black Mirror (that show makes me crazy anxious) I present you with a bunch of unrelated short stories. I intended the subjects to be varied however they turned out to be all incestuous in nature so I labelled this as the theme of this particular volume. I will be updating weekly as not every chapter in this volume is finished. Enjoy, and I hope to be releasing more soon! All criticism (and any praise) is appreciated.