[Report This]Date: October 23 2018 6:26 PM Title: Hyde Rises
If only those who eaten a person cannot be shrunk, how did half the world shrink initially? Confusing and a plot hole lol unless I'm missing something.
Love the direction it took and oh boy cannot wait for more!
Author's Response:
I explain it later, but that first wave of shrinking was an accident. Things went haywire, random people shrunk, etc. When the people responsible finally made working shrink rays, at first theyd only work on people who didnt eat tinies. Hope that clears it up. Thanks for all the comments :D
[Report This]Date: April 08 2018 6:04 PM Title: Hyde Rises
Now, THAT was a plot twist! Did not see that coming, but I like the direction you seem to be pointing the narrative towards.
Would an intermission with Joey and Robyn be too much to hope for? :P
Looking forward to Act 3 very much, your writing is superb!
Author's Response:
Thanks again :D you do me great honor with your words. I'm not sure what you mean by intermission, but Joey and Robyn are still going to very much be in the story. That was by no means a permanent exit from the story on their part. I have plans for both of them :D