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Reviewer: Frizzle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 19 2018 4:45 PM Title: Hyde's First

Holy shit... I can't believe she's gone! I have to admit that my heart breaks for her... Though I wanted it initially, the way Valerie disregarded her friends life was so indescribably cruel, that I can't help but feel a deep hatred for her.

 

Crystal was really making the story for me, and now that she's gone I feel empty inside :(

 

R.I.P. Crystal

 

 

Otherwise hot damn is Valerie a sexy deviant.



Author's Response:

She certainly is.  I had mixed feelings about this chapter, since it pretty much set the story to a certain tone... but much like Valerie, if I could do it all over, I'd have Crystal's story end the same way again and again.  But these first 7 chapters were always my favorite because of the dynamic these characters had, and what Valerie ended up doing with Crystal leaves some permanent repercussions to Valerie's other relationships.  I feel like the story became darker as a result, but I guess that's expected given that Valerie is like sprinting down said dark path.

Reviewer: io1908 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 14 2018 5:48 PM Title: Hyde's First

Really great story 10/10!

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