Date: October 19 2018 4:45 PM Title: Hyde's First
Holy shit... I can't believe she's gone! I have to admit that my heart breaks for her... Though I wanted it initially, the way Valerie disregarded her friends life was so indescribably cruel, that I can't help but feel a deep hatred for her.
Crystal was really making the story for me, and now that she's gone I feel empty inside :(
R.I.P. Crystal
Otherwise hot damn is Valerie a sexy deviant.
Author's Response:
She certainly is. I had mixed feelings about this chapter, since it pretty much set the story to a certain tone... but much like Valerie, if I could do it all over, I'd have Crystal's story end the same way again and again. But these first 7 chapters were always my favorite because of the dynamic these characters had, and what Valerie ended up doing with Crystal leaves some permanent repercussions to Valerie's other relationships. I feel like the story became darker as a result, but I guess that's expected given that Valerie is like sprinting down said dark path.
Date: February 14 2018 5:48 PM Title: Hyde's First
Really great story 10/10!