[Report This]Date: January 19 2018 9:03 AM Title: Chapter 3
Made me sad to see the sisters fighting... as much as Ky was arrogant and proud she didn't hated her sister...
Maybe just my imagination, could be Ky (in her own proud and extremely rude way) trying to force her younger sis to not let go of something so amazing that will change her life. But of course, someone like Ky would never ever outright express her feelings. Too embarrassing, too humiliating.
Guess she will have to endure the sibling rivalry of an Elite overshadowing her until she apologize for saying Les wasn't pretty! You don't tell a little girl she isn't pretty...
Author's Response:
True. The 'not pretty' comment stung Les quite badly at the time.
Let's hope they're able to patch things up.
Date: January 19 2018 9:00 AM Title: Chapter 3
Ha, as soon as I read Ky's reaction I thought "NotSirk is going to love this girl".
Great chapter, and I love Les' genuine resistance to elevating.
Author's Response:
Thanks, realIRS.
We'll have another Les POV chapter soon, so we can see if she maintains that resistance.
[Report This]Date: January 19 2018 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 3
Wow.....Kyliegh Watts is a legend! She handled that situation way better than a heartbroken child should. I tend to read too much into things, but that felt like she was doing the right thing for her sister and family even though it hurt Les in the short term. Maybe when Les ascends she'll figure out what actually happened here.
That being said. Being an elite's not everything is this world. It's overhyped! Bunch of hyper intelligent, probably attractive, tall, vaguely godlike (except when they're actually godlike) beings, with the ability to make you a "vassal" (whatever that is....probably just a glorified secretary), or manipulate your mind, and have a virtually unlimited amount of authority and autonomy even over their own parents......eh *apathetic shrug* Sound like a bunch of chumps if you ask me. Humans are way more interesting. I mean it sounds like elites are basically plant people. You really wanna be part plant, Ky? Like a weird broccoli-girl? That's dumb...elites are dumb. "Elites are dumb"- NotSirk 2018 you can quote that at the beginning of the next chapter. So stay strong Ky! You are already an elite! Les still has a long way to go before she can even dream of catching up! Even if she grows to 200ft tall and can shoot lightning from her eyes (which I heard from a very credible source that elites can do) that won't mean a damn thing to Kyliegh Watts! Haha!
...Oh and great chapter.
Author's Response:
You'd be a great therapist for Ky...just the words she needs to hear right now.
Now that I think about it, she does remind me of some of your protags.
Thanks for the interesting remarks.
Date: January 18 2018 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 3
I sense a change in the dynamics. Ky better be nice or she'll be under Les' thumb, literally and figuratively. I hope Les can be smart enough to treat her sister well , better than what Ky would have done anyway.
Author's Response:
Les seems the nicer of the two, but she's only human.
Or, she was only human. :)
[Report This]Date: January 18 2018 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 3
Holy cow sir, this might be one of my new favorite stories. With how awesome the buildup was to the reveal (And not unexpected) growth spurt that Lesly will recieve, I can't wait to see how you follow it up from here! I'm almost sure she'll grow to be a titan, but this story is fantastic, and I love the worldbuilding you're achieving. You give me ideas for how to treat my own characters! Given the sibling relationship they have, I happen to enjoy the idea of the rivalry!
Author's Response:
Sometimes I like to include elements that are predictable. But there will also be surprises and twists.
I'm glad the story gives you ideas. Reading is important fuel to author imagination! I partly decided on sister-sister relationship in my story instead of sister-brother after reading yours.