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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 28 2018 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Hot and Bothered Mess

Your writing is incredible! It was so sexy!

The dialogue was fantastic and now I actually like Eva where as before, I didn't think much of her. You made her into a sexy goddess and now I can only imagine what her mother has in store.

The entire chapter was awesome! The flirting in the kitchen, the shrinking in the bedroom, and the fun they had on the bed!

Also, I love the phone call, becuase it gave us a tease of what Eva's mom is like. I hope she isn't like the cruel giantess that breaks bones and tortures people, but it also sexy and has fun with her toys like Eva.

I just can't wait for the next chapter!

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