Date: January 15 2018 9:47 PM Title: Morning Routine
In response to your response to my review, yeah it might work best having her swallow him later. If you do it, you could always have something where she proposes to him she'd like to do it, and that she'd end I before he felt digestion, and in return, she does any scenario that he wants for him with her powers.
Author's Response:
I actually outlined something similar to this. Basically her bartering with him to do things he'd normally dislike in exchange for a boon
Date: January 15 2018 9:09 PM Title: Homework
Aww, another cute interaction! Keep 'em coming :)
Date: January 15 2018 10:20 AM Title: Goddess in the Streets
I have seen a few stories of late that are incredible but follow somewhat normal guidelines. Others, unique, new concepts but not always so jaw dropping. This is BOTH, original AND amazing! I haven't been this eager for new chapters of something in a while.
[Report This]Date: January 15 2018 6:21 AM Title: Morning Routine
I really love how casual she is about all this, she's adorable~ I wonder if she has any conveniently cute Asian friends hm hmmm!
She seems like someone I'd love to be best friends with in real life! I need someone to counter my quietness.
Have you considered having her shrink others too? Or like shrinking Mike so that a girl appears giant to her but still tiny to Kelly? Possibilities are endless and that's what I love about it.
Keep it up, it's fast paced enough to get to the action but stays in all the right places!
Author's Response:
The very next chapter will have a group shrinking. And, she does have a conveniently cute Asian friend who will be in the next chapter. If you want, I can change her name to Lily?
I also really enjoy your stories as well!
Date: January 15 2018 2:03 AM Title: Morning Routine
Another great chapter. Given her admitting to liking view, I'd like a chapter where she toys with and swallows him whole.
Author's Response:
I've toyed around with it but am on the fence about it. She likes playing with him but knowing he will experience that may be a bit meaner than she wants to. Right now at least. Maybe at a later point in the story.
Date: January 14 2018 7:00 PM Title: Goddess in the Streets
This is really well written and I genuinely ejoy the unaware aspect-ish of this. It's a scenario I never would have come with, but it is interesting nontheless. Solid first four chapters!
Date: January 14 2018 6:39 PM Title: Goddess in the Streets
Wowzers! That was a great chapter. I really enjoyed Kelly's way of proving her giantess version of all power corrupts and absolute power corrupts absolutely. Overall, this story has been really exciting and engaging.
Date: January 11 2018 2:10 PM Title: Physical Education
I'm loving this character interaction. I hope it carries through the rest of your story. Can't wait to see what you have in store for me!
Date: January 11 2018 11:02 AM Title: Morning Routine
Loving this and the concept, really hoping to see more. The pocket reality idea is fun, let's you do a wide variety of scenarios, and without her actually being a murdering psychopath.
Plus with him knowing and her happy about that, I just love it
Author's Response:
Thank you! I really enjoy the prospects the pocket reality offers. I hope you continue enjoying it!
[Report This]Date: January 11 2018 6:37 AM Title: Morning Routine
Just wanting to say... I love your characters and their interactions so far ! Keep going at it I want to read MOAR !
Author's Response:
Thank you very much! I intend to keep going for a bit with it. The characters are a lot of fun to write.
Date: January 09 2018 10:55 PM Title: Morning Routine
Really like how Kelly enjoys her omnipotence. It's not going mad with power so much as a casual why not and makes her cute. I imagine she would conjure a city just to ignore it as she pays attention to something mundane.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you're liking how Kelly is handling things so far. Casual and fun is what I'm going for with her view of things. I actually do have something like you suggested planned out! So I hope you enjoy that! Like she would shrink a city but then suddenly remember she has homework and forget it's there until later.
Date: January 06 2018 8:05 PM Title: Morning Routine
Wow, great start. I'm guessing that the girl is Kelly, or else I'm just really stupid :P
I'm hoping we see some interaction between the two in some later chapters if you're open to that suggestion!
Author's Response:
Oh definitely. The third chapter is mostly dialogue with them. I'm glad you're liking it so far!