Date: January 22 2018 9:43 AM Title: Morning Routine
I like this story so much that I finally decided to create an account just to tell you about it.
It’s really an interesting premise, and even though the omnipotence can get tiresome quickly you have managed to make it exciting at every chapter. The best part it’s really the relationship between the main characters, they play so well against each other, it’s a testament of your talent as a writer. I hope we can get more intimidate chapters of their friendly banter and more exploration of extreme sizes, since it’s something that I think you would do marvelously at. Thank you for writing this great story.
Thank you very much! My goal in this was to really flesh out the relationship between Mike and Kelly. I'm definitely going to do some extreme size difference stuff, that's my favorite area of growth and shrinking.
Date: January 16 2018 10:03 PM Title: Morning Routine
I'm really enjoying this story and commenting on it way less than I should. I really enjoyed the gym scene the most so far. As for what I'd like to see, how about her putting him into compromising situations while shrunken. Such as being placed in a girl's breast pocket without her knowing or suddenly taking a test inside of a girl's skirt.
I'm glad you're enjoying it! I definitely have plans for him to be put into unaware or awkward situations with other characters.
Date: January 16 2018 9:40 PM Title: Morning Routine
I really enjoy this story and it’s playfullness!! Any chance we can get a foot chapter where she shrinks him and puts him in her socks? Or maybe grows gigantic and traps the city in her shoes or underneath her stinky socks that she drops on the city after like gym, rains sweat and stink!
I'm glad you like it so far. I'm not the biggest fan of feet, but I do have a few foot related things planned mainly because that'd be her playfully toying with people or the city
Date: January 16 2018 12:47 PM Title: Homework
so far, i really like this! Its fresh and interesting, and doesn't spoil itself early.
As for what i would like to see, maybe have Mike gradually getting shrunk to microscopic size whilst playing on Kelly's body? From your other work it seems that you do these perspectives quite well, and i think this would be fun
Date: January 15 2018 9:47 PM Title: Morning Routine
In response to your response to my review, yeah it might work best having her swallow him later. If you do it, you could always have something where she proposes to him she'd like to do it, and that she'd end I before he felt digestion, and in return, she does any scenario that he wants for him with her powers.
I actually outlined something similar to this. Basically her bartering with him to do things he'd normally dislike in exchange for a boon
Date: January 15 2018 10:20 AM Title: Goddess in the Streets
I have seen a few stories of late that are incredible but follow somewhat normal guidelines. Others, unique, new concepts but not always so jaw dropping. This is BOTH, original AND amazing! I haven't been this eager for new chapters of something in a while.
Date: January 15 2018 6:21 AM Title: Morning Routine
I really love how casual she is about all this, she's adorable~ I wonder if she has any conveniently cute Asian friends hm hmmm!
She seems like someone I'd love to be best friends with in real life! I need someone to counter my quietness.
Have you considered having her shrink others too? Or like shrinking Mike so that a girl appears giant to her but still tiny to Kelly? Possibilities are endless and that's what I love about it.
Keep it up, it's fast paced enough to get to the action but stays in all the right places!
The very next chapter will have a group shrinking. And, she does have a conveniently cute Asian friend who will be in the next chapter. If you want, I can change her name to Lily?
I also really enjoy your stories as well!
Date: January 15 2018 2:03 AM Title: Morning Routine
Another great chapter. Given her admitting to liking view, I'd like a chapter where she toys with and swallows him whole.
I've toyed around with it but am on the fence about it. She likes playing with him but knowing he will experience that may be a bit meaner than she wants to. Right now at least. Maybe at a later point in the story.
Date: January 14 2018 6:39 PM Title: Goddess in the Streets
Wowzers! That was a great chapter. I really enjoyed Kelly's way of proving her giantess version of all power corrupts and absolute power corrupts absolutely. Overall, this story has been really exciting and engaging.
Date: January 11 2018 11:02 AM Title: Morning Routine
Loving this and the concept, really hoping to see more. The pocket reality idea is fun, let's you do a wide variety of scenarios, and without her actually being a murdering psychopath.
Plus with him knowing and her happy about that, I just love it
Thank you! I really enjoy the prospects the pocket reality offers. I hope you continue enjoying it!
Date: January 11 2018 6:37 AM Title: Morning Routine
Just wanting to say... I love your characters and their interactions so far ! Keep going at it I want to read MOAR !
Thank you very much! I intend to keep going for a bit with it. The characters are a lot of fun to write.
Date: January 09 2018 10:55 PM Title: Morning Routine
Really like how Kelly enjoys her omnipotence. It's not going mad with power so much as a casual why not and makes her cute. I imagine she would conjure a city just to ignore it as she pays attention to something mundane.
I'm glad you're liking how Kelly is handling things so far. Casual and fun is what I'm going for with her view of things. I actually do have something like you suggested planned out! So I hope you enjoy that! Like she would shrink a city but then suddenly remember she has homework and forget it's there until later.
Date: January 06 2018 8:05 PM Title: Morning Routine
Wow, great start. I'm guessing that the girl is Kelly, or else I'm just really stupid :P
I'm hoping we see some interaction between the two in some later chapters if you're open to that suggestion!
Oh definitely. The third chapter is mostly dialogue with them. I'm glad you're liking it so far!