Reviewer: midnightwriter85 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 28 2019 7:07 AM Title: Chapter 2

This is the best story I've read recently. I really like the way that you dropped right into the action. The situation, so perfect, was well thoughtout and the fast pace is literally 'Breathtaking' 

I hope that this isn't a short story. This one has got some merit. I would love to see this girl and her friends use her shrinking stuff over and over again.  As for the 'Teacher' I'd say that once she has broken his spirt and he succomes to her overwhelming power and size, and starts being a good little pet... she'll just squash him! 

 The way she casually takes him is such a turn on, I love it! The rating should be at least fifty stars! * * * * * * * * * * *

  Please keep it going, I can't wait for the next update! *.*