[Report This]Date: May 01 2022 9:54 PM Title: MAJOR/minor SPECIAL: I'm Not Your Babe
Hey, I know I'm commenting on this way late, but this is an interesting universe and a fun story you've built here. I really enjoy the interplay between the different personalities here, especially Izzellah's assertiveness.
Regarding the chapter end notes, if you're not being sarcastic, all of the titan empire stuff is on its own website (thetitanempire.com). There's a lot there. It's absolutely my favorite size-related universe that I've found.
[Report This]Date: December 20 2017 2:06 AM Title: MAJOR/minor SPECIAL: I'm Not Your Babe
Sab kicked some ass, Izzy might make a lot of money to build a new car or whatever she wants and it seems the core family is coming together nicely.
If you threw in a meatball sub I'd consider that a damn good day.
Author's Response:
I mean....I think Sabrina's the one who got her ass kicked but to each their own.
[Report This]Date: December 19 2017 11:45 PM Title: MAJOR/minor SPECIAL: I'm Not Your Babe
An excellent conclusion for the crossover! I'm glad you've written it, because I know I wouldn't be able to write Sabrina and Izzy a quarter of a half as well as you do! I really like the relation between Alejandro and SHannon, how the minor can, sometimes, be protective of the gigantic MAJOR. The way Izzy feels about being from a poor family compared to Alejandro's also great. Honestly, if she voiced those feelings, our one-armed minor would probably pester Shannon until she made the changes necessary for Izzelah to become one of her most important ambassadors, haha !
Overall, most excellent!
Author's Response:
I'm sure you'd do well enough. I'm more worried if I fumbled with your characters. Thanks for the commnt.
[Report This]Date: December 19 2017 9:13 PM Title: MAJOR/minor SPECIAL: I'm Not Your Babe
So...wait, is this....?
Nevermind, I’m just gonna enjoy it.
Your witty dialogue is really on display here. I love the slightly more articulate Izzy and how she’s in just the right place between Alejandro and Shannon, to generate tension. A more on-her-level tiny makes for an actually more complicated interaction, while a biggie she actually has some admiration for makes us think we are going to see a more fearful, submissive side to her but lights her inner fire and lets her speak her mind.
It was so fun, but so complex. A really awesome, rewarding read.
The biggies’s antics were a blast, but with Shannon there, it looks like everyone is fighting for second place.
I’m not really on board with a Sabby/Izzy thing. SabIzzy? But it really comes off as Izzy being generous and nice. Which I really am happy to see. I love angry Izzy, but these sides of her are nice to see too.
I’m hoping we’re seeing a “special/possible” scene here, because I feel Izzy is growing faster as a character than this would suggest, being a year later. But who knows? Her outer face may be very similar, while her deeper self my be vastly different.
Alejandro and Izzy supporting each other and being understanding was really enjoyable. The way they instantly had in-jokes to share really emphasizes their chemistry. Great, subtle, romantic writing.
You clearly were energized in your work here and I want to thank you for sharing this “fan fiction” of your own world.
Peace
pix
Author's Response:
It's a strange duality. I figure Izzellah would be both terrified of Shannon and inspired by Alejandro this complicates things since they're together. I honestly don't see her liking Shannon that much. She's pretty sour on most MAJORS and based on what I've read the public probably only knows the dominating businesswoman side of her. Plus she's just too big! Like c'mon! I'm actually pretty interested in what Kurogane335 thinks of how I handled their characters.
It would be Sizzell because of the crackling fire of their love! Get on board or get out the way less you get burned! I mean uhhh, nothing's set in stone. Sabrina did have a pretty bad day though. Izzellah can be nice. This is just a vaguely canonical fanfiction sooo I wouldn't read too much into it.
Thanks for the comment.