[Report This]Date: February 22 2018 6:37 AM Title: Her Next Agenda is Retribution
It's clear the "fracture" in Fracture Factor is Justine's mind. I don't even know what to say. I've been desensitized to Justine's actions now. Eating Lewis' mom isn't even the worst thing she's done. I'll tell you what though? She'll have to answer for that one if the God she believes in does exist. Add it to the list. Even killing Lewis would've been a huge leap for her flimsily defined justice, but eating his mom?! You had a mom too Justine! Is she on the hook for all the people you've eaten?! Cause that's way worse than Lewis paralyzing your bro!
Okay rant over. Honestly I'm kind of glad Justine doesnlt feel too guilty about Marvin or mama Lewis. We've been there and done that with the guilt trips. Al least deluded avenging angel Justine had the illusion of conviction regardless of how temporary that unhealthy mindset was. It's a little frustrating to see Justine still struggling to find her footing and come to terms with what she is, but I think it's a journey. One day she will achieve her final form! And ultimately she'll be better for it. Stable. Confident. Capable. Not necessarily good for the small humans depending on where she ends up on the ol' giantess spectrum between gentle and violent, but she'll either be healthy enough to make ammends for the people she's hurt and the lives she's taken, or she won't care! Humans are food and only the ones she likes deserve to live. Who's gonna stop her? Not me! I thankfully live in a crazy giantess free country.
Reach your final form Justine. Good luck!
Oh and John! Stop being such a bitch! Just talk to Justine! Move! Do something! Take your hot 25 year old widow and skip town with the kids! There's literally no reason to stay in Justine country! Take up the sword! Slay a dragon! Start a shoe shop in the city! I don't know! But your mom was a bitch and cowering in fear is boring. Justine is kind of okay with you and probably won't eat you even if she's hungry. Work with that!
Author's Response:
To the relatively primitive culture she lives in many people that merely encounter Justine experience quite a psychological shock to their state of mind. So in the early stages for someone that actually underwent such a transformation into a giantess without any explanations is bound to cause some unhealthy mental health issues to crop up. A fracture in Justine's mind that is struggling to deal with the reality of what has happened to her is a fairly natural response.
It also seems your not the only one desensitized to Justine's action's as she herself is starting to drift away slipping deeper into her darker desires. Making amends seems much less likely now as her town likely only sees her as a man eating monster and someone that absolutely can't be trusted. If she tries for a more benevolent path Justine will likely end up leaving town and taking those she cares about with her.
Though if she ended up viewing humans as mere food while only treating the one's she like's as people then I think people would want to get and stay on her good side. Christina would be the most horrified as she really finds the idea of being swallowed alive terrifying. Kevin and Mark's reaction to such a dark downturn of her personality would create drama for sure.
The next chapter I update the story with will be longer and hopefully of higher quality as I had a hard time getting this chapter to work with me the way I had envisioned it.
Thanks again NotSirk for the review and hopefully Justine settles on how she will treat her fellow smaller human beings. For their sake I hope she keeps seeing them as people, but on the other hand it's more fun if she viewed them as food.