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Reviewer: NotSirk Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 15 2017 1:58 PM Title: Past matters

You really make Justine sympathetic and her actions relatable. She just threatened two people and stole their property and I still just feel horrible she has to eat meat raw. It makes me wonder what a solution would be. As it is now she'll either die of starvation or be forced to hunt and pillage food the rest of her life. Not a great option considering it's been made clear she's strong but not invincible. The cows are only a bandaid though. I hope she doesn't become such a nuisance that organized law enforcement start hunting her. I'm actually starting to wonder if this story will end in tragedy. I kind of just want her to change back. 

Know idea how it will end for Justine. Looking forward to reading more.



Author's Response:

I think at this point Justine has stired the pot to the point that law enforcement won't be far behind. As for her eatting raw meat I have a few solutions in mind, but haven't settled on what I want to do. Dying of starvation or being attacked while pillaging food is a real risk Justine has to face.

As for if the story will end in tragedy I can't say mostly becuase I don't have any idea of how I want to the end the story at this point.

 

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