[Report This]Date: November 18 2017 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 4: the end of block C
This better be a dream of some sort. I mean, all the characters just died, I think.
The emperor gets the final say? I thought Deziree was in charge and was expecting her to keep David as a trophy of some sort. Nice twist.
I'm wondering if block c will wake up back in their room or soemthing. I have no idea what is going to happen now. I even checked if you ended the story, haha!
I think you should add some cliffhangers so we can think about soemthing for upcoming chapters. Here, I feel like the future is unclear and it might be confusing to others.
I'm interested at how the rest of the group may react to David. I think they are watching the battle as ghosts or something.
Crazy sequence of events, and I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Alright, so the emperor thing! The whole colosseum, including the crowd, emperor and weapons are all just an illusion Deziree creates to stroke her own ego. She loves the theatrics of it all. She keeps the weapons live because she enjoys the sport and competition, but when Sebastian shot the arrow and it passed through her, it was her reflexes just protecting her, she didn't mean to cheat. When David caught her off guard, she lost whatever level of concentration it takes to keep it going, and that caused the illusion to break for a second.
As for the rest of it. . . . A part of me wants to just end it here. leave everyone who reads it bummed out. Lol. You'll just have to wait and see I guess.