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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 18 2017 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 4: the end of block C

This better be a dream of some sort. I mean, all the characters just died, I think.

The emperor gets the final say? I thought Deziree was in charge and was expecting her to keep David as a trophy of some sort. Nice twist.

I'm wondering if block c will wake up back in their room or soemthing. I have no idea what is going to happen now. I even checked if you ended the story, haha!

I think you should add some cliffhangers so we can think about soemthing for upcoming chapters. Here, I feel like the future is unclear and it might be confusing to others.

I'm interested at how the rest of the group may react to David. I think they are watching the battle as ghosts or something.

Crazy sequence of events, and I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Alright, so the emperor thing!  The whole colosseum, including the crowd, emperor and weapons are all just an illusion Deziree creates to stroke her own ego. She loves the theatrics of it all.  She keeps the weapons live because she enjoys the sport and competition, but when Sebastian shot the arrow and it passed through her, it was her reflexes just protecting her, she didn't mean to cheat. When David caught her off guard, she lost whatever level of concentration it takes to keep it going, and that caused the illusion to break for a second.

 

As for the rest of it. . . . A part of me wants to just end it here. leave everyone who reads it bummed out. Lol.   You'll just have to wait and see I guess.

 

 

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 17 2017 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 3

Hmm. Getting all the coins doesn't seem that bad. The guy just got distracted by her tits. The tiny guys suffered a worse fate. If I got all the coins, I would wrestle her. Wouldn't mind getting entangled with her.

Oddy? This must be a nickname. I'm trying to picture this leader named Oddy. Hmm. Maybe it's just the name Deziree gave him. They seem to have a lot of history together. She seems to sort of respect him.

Now I'm curious. What did she do with Eddy for hours? I really want to know. It sounded sexual, the way she said it.

I agree with Sebastian, this is one long fight. I'm ready for what's next in this story.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

They all kind of have history I would say.  In the next chapter you get a taste of what's actually going on.  

Reviewer: D W Signed [Report This]
Date: November 16 2017 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 3

Assuming what they do, I was wondering about someone, just one guy getting all the size coins to go toe to toe with her.  Now I guess I'd be the one to make that rookie mistake.  The handheld and toss of tinies is nice.  Surprized there aren't more stories where a woman juggles tinies or plays hacky-sack with one {or perhaps a few tied up in a small balled up net like soup greens}.

I like how you worked that "you'll wake up just in time..." in there.  Sounds like maybe, just maybe Deziree keeps her playtoys alive afterall.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!  It gets me motivated to write faster because I really want to discuss my concept with someone.  Probably 1 or 2 more chapters before anything is thoroughly explained. 

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 13 2017 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 2

First, welcome to giantess world!

Wow, this is one entertaining story. I feel like someone could easily make a movie with this. That's how good you describe the story so far.

David is realistic, I like how I can relate to him and he is learning about this world just as we are.

The African is also an awesome character, leading his block into battle. I think he should have a name though. Seems to be a major character.

Deziree enjoys violence with her little men. I was wondering what about Mistress Cynthia? She is the Mom, right? I hope she is the sexy one who happens to be naughty to these guys.

Like what D W said, I'm not exactly sure where this story is going, but it is new and refreshing, so I will gladly follow this story.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Thank you for the review!  I'm glad you enjoy it.  As far as characters go, yes the African has a name, along with the rest of block C.  I'm just working towards it naturally.  They haven't had any real time for intros yet.  

 

As for Cynthia,  it will be a ways off before we meet her.  I don't actually know what her character will be for sure, but I have some ideas.  Still have a lot of explaining on how this world works to do yet.  Keep an eye out. 

Reviewer: D W Signed [Report This]
Date: November 12 2017 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 1

What a terrific opening chapter.  I don't know where this story is going; but a selfish suggestion on my part is that if a guy is killed, the giantess retains his soul or reincarnates him as someone or something (e.g. her clothing).  Can't wait to find out what size coins are-do.  



Author's Response:

Thank you!  The plot actually uses an element similar to that. Stay tuned. 

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