Date: October 27 2017 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 1
Really great story. I hope there's more to it!!!
You paint a vivid image of Vera as a sexy professor. You also did a nice job of describing the students and their fates. The romantic dinner and sweaty cloths are a clever touch.
My only complaint are the huge paragraphs. They make it a bit difficult to keep one's place while reading.
If I did this today, it would be better broken up, but as it is a reupload I'll keep it as is.
Date: October 27 2017 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 1
I know it's a resubmit but I didn't review it before and felt the need to say good job on these quick reads lol.
What I mean is, even though it's a single chapter, it feels overall complete as it stands and still has openings for a possible second chapter should you feel interested. I'm not super good at reviewing a short story though so forgive me for the bland review really.