Reviews For Drinking 'Alone'
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Reviewer: D W Signed [Report This]
Date: October 27 2017 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 1

Really great story.  I hope there's more to it!!!  

You paint a vivid image of Vera as a sexy professor.  You also did a nice job of describing the students and their fates.  The romantic dinner and sweaty cloths are a clever touch.

My only complaint are the huge paragraphs.  They make it a bit difficult to keep one's place while reading.

 



Author's Response:

If I did this today, it would be better broken up, but as it is a reupload I'll keep it as is.

Reviewer: MadHatter Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 27 2017 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 1

I know it's a resubmit but I didn't review it before and felt the need to say good job on these quick reads lol.

What I mean is, even though it's a single chapter, it feels overall complete as it stands and still has openings for a possible second chapter should you feel interested. I'm not super good at reviewing a short story though so forgive me for the bland review really.

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