Reviews For Wild Ride
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Reviewer: Tigernach Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 02 2017 7:19 PM Title: The favour

Ch. 1: I couldn't comment after the first chapter, so I decided to do it here and now. I didn't notice any gramatical errors, and the story seems to be well founded.

Ch. 2: You have really gotten into the action quickly... You've got me wondering how he is going to handle two girls, being the way he is? Or even if he is going to have the choice?

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 25 2017 5:46 PM Title: The favour

A nerdy blonde girl, huh? That lets out Peyton. But, a killer headache and a matching pain in his (presumably left) arm? Holmesian logic leads me to deduce...an injection of some kind of super-scientific chemical substance!

Author's Response: We'll see.......

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