Date: January 28 2018 10:36 PM Title: The New Girl
Hey, I just wanted to say that I really liked this story. You should do something you enjoy, if you aren't feeling it, don't feel obliged to continue. I personally loved the unaware parts of the story, especially the tremendous details. I look forward to reading whatever you write in the future, and I would love to read a chronicle of Fraser. Good luck. :)
Date: November 29 2017 10:28 AM Title: The New Girl
I love the way you're going with this story! It's probably my favorite one on the site! Don't listen to any of the reviews that don't like it; they're wrong.
Author's Response: Wow! I can't believe what you just said. Literally speechless right now......
Date: November 27 2017 9:00 PM Title: Anna's choice
That was hot, even though she didn't do anything. I think I enjoy listening to Anna's thoughts. Especially when she has these naughty thoughts.
I was really hoping for Joe to be shoved in her vagina, becuase when he wakes up, he would send such pleasure to Anna.
Hmm. Since Anna doesn't let her pussy kiss him this chapter, maybe Anna will let her pussy get him next chapter. Looks like Anna wants to be a naughty girl and Joe is not too fond of it. Maybe Anna will have to tie Joe up so he can satisfy her. Anna should tie Joe to the front of her panties and keep him there while she talks to other people. She gets pleasure and Joe can't stop her.
Imagine if Joe woke up when he was 1 inch away from her lovely pussy. He would be probably freaking out, haha.
If this was written by any other author, I would request her mom to show up, but looks like Anna has to carry the fun. I hope she becomes to sexy goddess I wish she can be.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: November 20 2017 7:27 PM Title: Part one: Itchy and Scratchy
Well, it was indeed a sexy chapter. Joe slippin' and sliding in her panties and stumbling into her ass crack.
If Joe thought walking was bad, imagine a workout. Now that should feel like 10 earthquakes. Another forecast of ass heading Joe's way.
Love the giantess lap dance. I always have dreamed of that sort of thing.
So to get rid the itch, she shoved it toward her asshole. Nice.
Well, that vote last chapter couldn't have gone any worse. I was the only one who wanted crotch over ass.
Well, I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: I'm sorry if the decisions aren't going your way...... Yet.......
Date: November 19 2017 8:26 AM Title: Part one: Itchy and Scratchy
I guess you could say that Joe's troubles aren't "behind" him, just yet.
Author's Response: I would say that's the second time you've used a cheesy joke, but those are the type of jokes I love! Keep em up!!😂
Date: November 13 2017 5:35 PM Title: The New Girl
Completey understood. I saw your previous reponse and completely respect it. In that case, would it be possible to have her wear flip flops, where the main character ends up hiding under one of her nail polished toenails. Just and idea.