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Date: January 12 2018 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 8...the Homunculi Pt. 2

Wow, that was dark but it ended with a note of hope. Glad that they took the homunculi in, as they were innocent and had suffered enough. That will be interesting now that they have a whole house full of tiny people.

I've never heard of homunculi absorbing the soul of the person they're based on. Is that from the legends or did you create that idea for the story?

Pretty sure I know who was possessing Keith (Oberon I assume?). Intrigued to see how that plays out.



Author's Response:

For homunculi lore I had to borrow from two sources. The German one (which did include Faust and how to create them) and Arabic. The Arabic one goes into more detail as to the nature of them. "Soulless creatures that hunger to be come human" was one quote. "Tiny humans with a fragment of a soul that yearns to be more than it is" was another. As you can see they differ slightly but convey a similar idea. They want to be human. Them eating souls was my play on it. 

Now with this group in the house, they will have a nice part to play in the next chapter. As for Oberon inside Keith...the better question is is it the Oberon of legend or something else? And what did he mean by "vested interest"?

 

Stay tuned :)

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